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SWEET!
Oh I love Saitou as the bad guy! He is such a good leader! Your character portrayal was in my opinion In Character too.

Man you are such a good author... I must admit tho I\'m still to stuck on K/K and RK in general, and don\'t read any other anime fanficlets, I think for you I\'ll probably sway. Cause I know it will be REALLY good stuff.

Much Love to ya!
De Lazy Lime

(Is it okay if I call ya Oka-san?)

This is a great story! Fine plot and characterisations. Since it\'s an AU the fact that Kaoru and her clan are headquartered on an abandoned Ellis Island is not a problem. If I remember right Ellis Island WAS abandoned for several decades before it was made a national park/historic site. Guess in this reality it wasn\'t, if I remember right the original money for it\'s restoration was part of the money raised to repair/refurbish the Statue of Liberty, so I guess fortunately for Kaoru & clan there just wasn\'t enough money to restore both Ellis Island and Lady Liberty. ;-)

Another well done chapter. The graphic details were so insightful and made the chapter that much better to read. I loved the ending, as it leaves us with anticipation for the next chapter and upcoming war. You made Saitoh so ruthless and cocky like he is in the actual show, I love that evil bastard.

Keep up the good work my friend,
Sephiress

Well, very nice and necessary, but I am dying to go back to Hiko, Soujiro, Kaoru and above all see the first meeting of Hiko and Kenshin. I am sure it should be memorable.

Sensei Tsuki-sama :

Another fabulous chappy! Should have known you would have snuck in shishio into the picture; evil laugh!!! Where is Yahiko; personanlly, I think he should be made into Kenshin\'s loyal lap-dog (sorry did I ever tell you that I cant stand Yahiko??) Giggles evilly but really, Tsuki-sama great reading, keep it up!!!

Forehead to the floor in respect

catti

So, the monster is coming??? And Shishio? He is a surprise! But I really can\'t wait to read about Knshin and Kaoru again! They are so sexy here and I\'m missing your lemons already... he he... HENTAI LERE!!!!!! Oh, eeeewwwww! The teeth part was disgusting. It was like the canibals in those old movies. Give me creeps.

Big hugs evil sensei, because you really showed your fangs here!

Lere

I really LOVE this story!! It\'s one of the very few I have read that actually makes a hell of a lot of sence. I mean you explain why they have powers and why they are \'alergic\' and other stuff, besides that bit of \'The Acient Language\' and shit it\'s really interesting. I also like the way you portrait the charactes no OCC\'s or anything really strange. You like history, thats cool!! I belive history is something important and that we should all know at least alittle about our past. Anyway please update really soon I think this is just getting started.

Tsuki-sama:

You do me the greatest honor in mentioning me in chapt 10 as giving you the courage to write this story; arigatou for that. but in reality it is your story and remember what I told you back during the \"End of a Weary Day\" saga, do not let anyboell ell you what or what not to write about; it is your story, your idea, and if they do not like how it is written, formatted, or flowsey cey can go on to another story or another website; this is America, freedom of speech is all well and good but if it hurts somebodys feelings, make them think less of themselves then they can go to another country!!!!

Your are my shin-yuu and I am your one and only baka deshi; bows to the great one

catti-dono

Ah, mon ami, don\'t think I\'m not reading the new chapters you gift us with! *chuckles and grins* This story has not once failed the expectations you have created with your previous chapters. It is still every bit as beautiful and compelling as when I first began to read. The interactions flow so naturally, and your descriptions make it very easy to be swept up into the story. It\'s more like seeing a movie to me than reading a story, and you never fail to leave me wanting more. And just a note abthe the Ellis Island bit... as you said, this is a story. It amuses me that they chose that piece of information to accuse you of being \"silly\" or \"ill-informed\" about in a story involving vampires and mythical creatures as though they were so very commonplace. *shakes head and sighs over the rudeness of some people* This is your story, and if they are making the choice to read. Use whatever speaks to you in any way you wish... that\'s the beauty of creativity and fiction. They should try to remember that you are the one being gracious enough to let us take a peek into a world you created and have chosen to share. It\'s intriuging, entertaining, and lovely, and I will read for as long as you choose to write and post for us.

Merci de partager votre beau cadeau avec nous ^__^

I don\'t like this person named \"Fantasy\" ... if she dosen\'t like your ideas or your stories then she/he doesn\'t need to read them -.- I swear .... you shouldn\'t feel sorry for that WITCH, I hope you never have to hear from that uncaring person again.... if that person dosen\'t have anything nice to say then that person should shut the f*ck up. -.-x

Idon\'t Care what others think... I think you should continue to write your story because there are going to be people lihat hat every where and sometimes I think you should take no mind to those who have no brain and can\'t write stories of their own.


***Kaoru-chan*****

^*^* Always continue to do your best and follow your own heart and feelings^*^*^