rate_review Reviews

I love it! It was so good! You\'ve made me a fan of this pairing!

Very hot! And I was just daydreaming about those two! <3

Keep up the good work!

I liked it, really. ^_^ I love one-shots, and i have read plenty of them, so i can tell you for sure - it\'s a fine lemon, indeed. ^_^

wow....i personally loved it! You did good! It\'s not normal for me to read lemons, but hey....every girl wants to see her hott guys bang eachother! ^.~ You did great!! Totally made my day!!

This is your first lemon? I would have never guessed!

Don\'t be embarrassed - you\'re really good! Seriously, I\'ve read enough lemons I\'m almost immune to them. But you make it all new again. You pay attention to the right parts. You give enough plot to introduce the reader to the situation, but not so muchit puts off the play or takes over the story. I would suggest getting a beta just for spell check type stuff, but it\'s really good work. Don\'t stop on us - and hey, got any plots with Momiji? lol Bunny boy is ignored in fanfic land!

Really, keep up the great work. ^.~

WOOT!!! That\'s was so AWESOME! I love your fiction!!! It was SO GENIOUS! I\'m seriously saying that since I\'ve come to realize that KyoGure is the best pairing, ever! Well-done! A few spelling errors were around, but, I loved the lemon! I can\'t wait to read more of your work! Good luck!

You know, you say you didnt like it, but I sure did. You should totally add more! ^^

You are so cute!Bend over part was a new one on me for fan fics...dogs dickhead was kinda..FUNNY.I like your stuff.

it was good keep yr wk comming

mmph, shigure isnt TOO old... ~_^

oh, BTW, guys dont go into heat, its strictly a female thing.