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for A Golden Heat

by crystalclear

person Stasha
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!! This was so amazing. I really do enjoy your lemon so dont think that you are bad at them. It was really well done for your first time. Thank you!!!
person Bishounenchaser
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was good! I loved it, I wish you would add a squel or more to it, I don\'t review often but I found this very review worthy
person anonymous reader
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely lemon of a rar rare pair. It was quite well done, being your first lemon. If I hadn\'t read your story a second time, I wouldn\'t have even recognized that it was your first, it was just that good (in my opinion)! It was indeed a very interesting pairing, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. Moreover, it was filled with plenty of detail and humor to make the story even more interesting. Keep up the wonderful work! Good luck.
person mehh
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Can you do an Akito(seme)/Yuki lemon where they go into heat?
person Asha Crone
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... that turned out very good. Although, the question now is- would Kyou possibly get pregnant?
person Cami
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, honey. I remember writing my first lemon, and let me assure you---- it wasn\'t anywhere near that good. It was like \"Oh you\'re so big\" *Blushes* Too much gay porn... Anyway, you did a very good job, and I\'m positive you will devolop into an excellent writer with a first attempt like that!

Also, thank you for writing FB yaoi *Waves Fruits basket Yaoi flag* there is way too much hentai written for this series and, somehow, it has put a damper on my urge to continue to buy the DVDs/Mangas... heck I THOUGHT Haru was gay, but now I\'m not so sure... too many Haru/Tohru het fics...

Keep up the good work!

-Cami The Homicidal Bunny
person TheGaffler
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty good story to tell you the truth. Will there be any more chapters to this?
person Alunya
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was Great! You did a wonderful job, especially if this is your first lemon ^_^ But i hear Practice makes perfect ~_^ so you should write as many as possible! Keep up the good work, hope to read your stories again.

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