rate_review Reviews

This is one of the best lemon fics and 383 fics that I've read. Thank you for writing this wonderful piece of story. I can't describe how much I love it. Oh and one more thing: Sanzo didn't seem OOC to me. Cheers~

Excellent work! The story progression was smooth. The word choices were on point. The action was clear and the whole thin tec technically sound. I like how you showed a more tender side of Sanzo, don\'t fret too much about OOC, somethings have to be suspended inorder to truely enjoy a fanfic. You found a good balance between story needs and character needs. All four of these men have layers to their personality that I suspect they don\'t even know. This is especially true for Sanzo. (Atleast in my eyes). Your protray of Hakkai was well done also.

Keep up the good work.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

That was an absolutely wonderful, romantic lemon of this pairing. There have been very, very few that have been this good! You\'ve done a fabulous job narrating and adding detail in this story. Plus, this is like the best pairing in the series of Gensoumaden Saiyuki. Outstandingly well-done work! Keep it up and update more magnificent pieces of literature.

.....Thank You. That really made my day (Kind of a bad day, I really needed that little bit of happiness ).

Beautiful, descriptive writing (and my favourite pairing!) you are quite talented with words. This is my new favourite songfic...ever. I\'m looking forward to more stories from you!

-Cami The Homicidal (Actually quite Happy right now) Bunny ^_^

I officially worship you at this moment.

I honestly got chills from that story. Itbeaubeautifully written and evocative, very true to character AND still really hot and romantic. 10 out of 10 for everything!

Please write more. My pride doesn\'t prevent my begging when it\'s worth it.

You write like I wish I could, and you did an absolutely wonderful job portraying both of them.