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baby--you should let me love you,
let me be the one to,
...um
compliment you on how good you wrote this fic
...and be a bit of a joker. but that doesn\'t mean i\'m kidding about how good i feel this story is.
you go, girl!

Oh... it was incredible! You have some spelling mistakes but I enjoyed this fic so much! You bettee get those fingers on the keyboard and continue thi story!!! I want more!! alright alright, sorry for the childish outburts ^-^ I loved your story and Joe Joe dealt with Francoise losing her virginity. It was so tender! All men should learn!!

Oh... it was incredible! You have some spelling mistakes but I enjoyed this fic so much! You bettee get those fingers on the keyboard and continue thi story!!! I want more!! alright alright, sorry for the childish outburts ^-^ I loved your story and how Joe dealt with Francoise losing her virginity. It was so tender! All men should lea Lad

good story hurry and add chapters 002 is the guy with the orange hair right? i keep forgeting which is which besides 003 009 and 001 because they cut it off air, DAMN PEOPLE!!!! well finish!

MORE and one more thing? Wasn\'t 001 in the room too? Or was it my skimming? bAh! GOOD ANYWAYS!

Lovely fic.
Needs some proofreading and touching up as it were, (Commonly known as betaing) but the story itself is wonderful.
What the heck is 002\'s problem? If he had feelings for 003 then he should\'ve spoken up about them a long time ago. 009 is better for 003 anyway.