rate_review Reviews

This was such a moving story. I didn't want to believe that Ryo had been untrue. I hoped that some kind of mistake had been made. Yet I could not draw my self away from what they were both feeling. I don't know why but I wished that at the end of the story Dee would have mentioned that he was with Ryo on his aniversity and that he saw the light on in the window that never went off. Crazy I guess, don't know why it seemed important. Represented hope on both their parts I guess. Thank you for sharing this amazing story.

I LOVE IT! i loooooooove angst and GIMME MORE! XD have any other angsty stories XD

I love you, move away with me, marry me and I will dedicate my life to making you happy as long as you keep writing. This was....so good.


Thank you.

I love you so much right now, can I kiss you?

Really intense.... I love the series and now I have to know what happened. It's different, and unless there's an amazing twist about what Ryo seems to have done it's an unflattering portrait of him, but it's really, amazingly good.

I'm going to keep going. This is too good. Thanks for the story!

i liked it alot, thanks for the good story and never let anyones comments keep you down!

hissssssssss i didn\'t read the reviews before reviwing myself, listin anon you little grrrrrrrrrrrr you know what, you suck! i hate you! fanfics aren\'t just about the plot of the particular series! you know whta you\'ve soiled FAKE because your evil, well your copy anyways, people should always be free to write whatever they want without some !@%!#heads like you on their tail, going against the author is even worse you know when i read it all i thought was Anon is calling her a whore? hate ta say it luv but your worse, thanks again for the great story and if you ever get someone reveiwing like that just put the signal of a cat in the sky and i will personly type like the wind!

aha! I KNEW there was a reasonable explanation! By the way, this story is really really good. I\'m really enjoying it, the fact that it makes you feel so much is deffinitely a strong point. Keep up the good work!

I really liked this fic. The depth of emotion in it really brought tears to my eyes at points, though I saw the whole portrait thing a mile off, thanks to your hint at the beginning. -Grin- Of course, that only made it sadder for me, since I knew that it wasn\'t Ryo\'s fault at all, and it had me rolling my eyes at Dee\'s idiocy. You did a great job of the pair, in my opinion. I don\'t think they were all that out of character, Dee being as hot-headed as he usually is... though Ryo was a little too soft perhaps? On second thoughts, no he wasn\'t. Yeah, you hit the characters spot on. The lemon...

Lemon\'s are always best when they have a story to back it up, especially a story as good and as passionate as yours. I\'m so glad it seems to be turning out okay in the end... it looked really dismal for a bit. But, back to the lemon. It was good, a little unadventurous, especially since the two scenes were very similar. I suggest perhaps differing the second scene a little more? Perhaps Dee couldn\'t find the lube and he had to use... other methods of getting Ryo ready? Or maybe even a switch of roles? Despite being very pretty, Ryo doesn\'t hit me as a complete uke, you know? Just something to think about.

I enjoyed reading this fic, thanks for sharing!

Wow! I\'ve just finished reading all 17 chapters and am exahusted, but i just had to say thankyou. You are a brilliant writer and i really liked the different view point(especially at the begining) you took on relationships. You kept me guessing till the last moment, though i had my suspisions on whether Ryo was unfaithful or not. I dont really have anything constructive to say on your style, but thankyou and please continue.