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WOWZER...I\'m left speechless on paper.*shocked and totally zoned out* I absolutely have no clue what to write...gosh, I can\'t use death threats, I can\'t call you names...what am I going to do? OH GOSH! I have no clue what to do!!!! *holds head* This is the first time, the first time where I don\'t have a smart remark to say! You got me good....you got me REAL good! Oh man, I\'m like, babbling randomly cuz I\'m totally, utterly, left with no words at all...Dammit! Now I\'m getting annoyed because this is the crappiest review I\'ve written to you so far. Well, at least you don\'t have to worry about I don\'t know, me using a tractor trailer and running you over with it...hahhahahhahaha! Once again, congrats, congrats! I applaud you for a job well done and rest assure, you did PULL this one off...I shall await for your next chapter and I\'ll be more than happy to keep it all hush hush...hmmm, although you better update soon, or I\'m gonna lift this burden from my shoulders! *^-^*

Don\'t worry about not having the story wrapped up. Be it 1 more chapter or 20 more chapters, it\'s a good tale and your tale. 8-)

I\'ve enjoyed this so far. 8-)

aspiker

Great Chapter. I think you\'re right too that there should have been a bit of time to think. When people are apart they usually only think of missing the other person or getting back together, but after they meet or do all the lovey stuff, then the brain starts working again and it\'s like \'Well, did he/she say this\' or \'Didn\'t he/she do that\'. I really like the part you wrote about forgiveness. And how you shifted back and forth to each of them. Thanks so much for not parting the two, and all that...

I don\'t think that one more chapter is going to do it though. What about Bikky? What about them being job partners again? There\'s still Derek in the way, isn\'t there? I don\'t remember anything being mention about anything happening to split Dee and him. Heck, I wouldn\'t mind it if you threw in a couple of chapters more just to tie it all up...unless you were able to do that in this next one. Okay, I\'m just going on again. So I\'ll be waiting for your next one....

yes it does, thank you. ^o^ update soon please

aw man i was almost crying at the end. eyes are still prickling great job can\'t wait for the next chappie. ^-^ Ja

HOORAY!!! Ryo forgave him!! I\'m so happy*sniff*!! I cried as I read this chapter. Can\'t wait to read nex next one!!!

The tension, the tension! I love how the description of the emotions both of them were going through, espiecally Dee. Ryo trying to figure out whether he wants to take Dee back or not. I don\'t know what to say. I was actually nervous about what Ryo was going to say and Dee\'s reaction. I mean I got so caught up in it. This was such a great chapter. I can\'t wait to see what happens.

This has been on hellofva story. You really hit people in the head with that first chapter. Nothing like building up to a boiling point, you just dump us in the boiling water like lobsters! If my head didn\'t stop spinning I\'m sure it would have popped off soon. I couldn\'t stop reading this fic once I got started. Usually I\'ll jump around after I read the first chapter, but you stopped each one where it left me having to check out that very next chapter. God, you have a knack knowing how to make it hurt! I really can\'t wait until you update you fic again! Soon please......

Heh...I\'m tooy toy to sign in so meh! I lUV this story and I\'m not one for uber-angsty stuff...You\'ve totally changed my view on these types of ficcys...SANKYOU!! =^.^= I can\'t wait to read more on this...poor Ryo...stupid Dee...Ah, they\'ll be all better before you know it! :33 Of course they will, why wouldn\'t they, they\'re made for each other...it\'s Destiny!! @.@ Well, I\'d better stop rambling...it\'s not good for other people\'s health...o.O;;;;

Yes! I loved it! I\'ve had that same I don\'t want to do what you say, but can\'t help but to do it anyway feeling. I loved Bikky\'s thoughts and how you had him be mature enough to know Dee was what Ryo really needed. I\'m mean, the kid was there during the two year of relationship building (while he tried to sabotage it) and I believe that once Ryo choose Dee as his love partner, since Bikky cared for Ryo, he accepted Dee a lot more. I don\'t doubt there were still \'battles\' but I like to think it was more of their way to be close. After all the fights and name calling, how could they let anyone else see anything other? So.. as in your story despite those exceptances, Bikky saw Ryo hurting, and he was hurt as well (like you said in the chapter) and I\'d expect him to turn on Dee, yet be the reason why he \'sided\' with him. Sorry, just writting as thoughts are coming. This probable makes no sense.
I loved the frozen expressions of Ryo\'s. And Dee\'s \'I can turn you over my knee...\' That was pretty bold (comical) for the moment. I do see Dee being the more aggressive so I don\'t doubt that he wouldn\'t resort to taking that kind of control. But I love his soft side that\'s getting exposed. I felt that I could \'feel\' Dee really nervous as he talked with Ryo there toward the end, even though he kept himself from groveling too overly much...
You\'re not really going to do the lasts chapter as you hinted at the end of 12 are you? Ryo seems to be having some reservations there.
You\'ve done excellent work. Very emotional ride you\'ve taken everyone on. You\'ve really done a great angst story, capturing people\'s attention like you did. You really hit the right buttons.