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OoOoO wowie that waz great ryoan-chan another great chapter... i dont think ryo would let his currently hurt feelings get in da way of his overall feeling for dee n i hope im right, their just to cute together... anywahs i hope this turns out like angst/fluff in da end (im a sap for sap ^-^;) but anyway iz fine with me! as long as u give us a great wowzer ending which i have no doubt u will ^_~ update reel soon got it ><

~ *huggles* Aka

Shoot! I missed reviewing the last chapter and you\'ve already moved on to 12. The site seemed to keep having problems and either I couldn\'t get on or couldn\'t send a review. But anyway... FANTASTIC! I love this story so much! All the crying, all the anguish! Bikky! Loved that part in both of them. I could see him sitting there tell Dee to give him another $20! And the toast falling out of Ryo\'s mouth was funny. Loved how that all got out in the open... Dee hugging him. Can\'t wait until the next and last chapter....!!!!!

Does Ryo still love him? Or is he going to give Dee the Goodbye boot? I dunno. But I reallly loved this chapter. Dee just took over, making sure he ate and everything. Then Bikky leaving for the wed. Id. I\'m surprised he left at all. I seriously thought he would say \"No\" and stay there keeping an eye on Dee, making sure he wouldn\'t try anything. Oh the agnst! Good job. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

What will Ryo\'s answer be? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

What is Ryo going to answer? hm?hm?hm? ^o^ Update soon please!!!

At last! I\'ve been waiting for this chapter long enough... I was so happy to see you\'ve updated! Ryo is going to say yes right? Don\'t torture me anymore#@ Sob sob..

HOW.COULD.YOU?!!!! I.WAS.THIS.CLOSE...THIS.CLOSE.TO.FINDING.HAPPINESS...AND.WHAT.DID.YOU.DO?...YOU.RUINED.IT!!!!!

HOW.COULD?!!!?!!!!*huffing and puffing* I.WAS.THIS.CLOSE... THIS.CLOSE.TO.FINDING.HAPPINESS AND.WHAT.DID.YOU.DO?YOU.RUINED.IT!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!! IT\'S INJUSTICE!!!!!! *clenching fists and blowing steam outta my nose* You play so dirty! What kind of author tortures readers and practically make them grovel?!!! Man I\'m mad...gawd! Couldn\'t you just like, add in some more stuff? Sheesh! That was such a teaser! I oughta report you to Criminal Investigations for the crime of doing injustice to people! I\'m practically fuming with anger! I can feel it through my body...oh crap...oh no...I can\'t stop it!!!! I\'m...so...sorry...*holds stomach, face contorts with pain and confusion, heavy breathing* It\'s...awakening...*muscles build up, veins pop out, turns green, voice deepens* It\'s...all...your...fault!!!! *clenches head and lets out an inhuman roar* YOU WILY!!!Y!!!!! *runs after ya* Hahhahahhahhaha oh man...awesome chapter as always! Well, looks like my boys are back to normal which makes me happy. I would\'ve been disappointed if Ryo died from malnutrition...now THAT would\'ve sucked totally! And I\'m glad I do crack you up! I\'m known for my bizarre sense of humor and imagination, hahhahhahaha...but anytime you feel crappy and are up to a good laugh, feel free to email me! I would love to keep in touch with you here or normally! *^-^* A WORD OF CAUTION TO THIS TALE, SHOULD KIT_YANG TURN, YOU WILL FAIL....

FINALLY...the KIT has RETURNED!!!! DO YOU SMELLLLLLL WHAT KIT IS COOKIN\'? Awesome chapter! I was like alright, finally, home boy is getting his act together! And I LOVED how Dee totally barged in and forced Ryo to get back on track even though there were no bitch slaps involved...hahhahhaha. I\'m waiting for the next chapters and yeah, I do have a problem...first you make me cry and break my heart, then you make me totally feel sorry for my Ryhen hen you have me agonizing over Dee\'s pain, then you make me mad as hell to the point where I was going to commit First Degree Murder on paper, and now, you\'re going to drive me crazy wondering if Dee is ever going to get back with Ryo...WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!!!! *grabs ya and bear hugs you* YOU\'RE SO HARDCORE! *big kawaii teary-eyes* I WORSHIP YOU! Hahahhahahahhahah...see, doesn\'t that make you want to update faster? Anyways, I got good news! My computer is fixed and I re-installed AOL...isn\'t that great? And here I thought GOD hated me! *^-^*

WoW.... I love your story, I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Oh i do hope that they get together, everything was really great, Ryo is such a sweetie, I feel bad that i like seeing him being forced into things. Oh well, your story is great, I\'m waitin\' for the next chapter with much anticipation