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I just can\'t say enough about this fic! I\'ve told all my friends and as many fake lovers as possible about it because it\'s just so good! It rivals some of the all time authors out there and on this site. *takes a deep breath* We\'re finally getting to the good stuff and I just can\'t get enough of it. Bikky\'s reaction was right on target and I felt so sorry for Ryo. I was crying at the beginning quotes and just kept a contast stream of grief until the end. Simply fantastic. I don\'t ever give credit where its not due. This fic is just... out of this world.

I\'m itching to read the next two chapters! The lovey-dovey fluff is on it\'s way and I\'m excited. Again, update as soon as possible and wow. What more can I say?

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

hehe... And I thought chapter 11 is going to be your final chapter.... sigh.... I\'ll have to wait again!!! Hey... please update ok> i really want to know what happens next...

This is the first fic I\'ve read that wasn\'t Yu Yu Hakusho and I must saat Iat I\'m quite impressed. Keep up the good work. >:`)

Oka this iz one of my favs i almost cried n it wouldnt be da first time ^^; anyways your fic iz so far da best fake fic ive read i luv da way how u put all the emotions in the fic so goddamn well i read all the chapters at once and i have yet to see any lemons WHERE THE HELL IS IT! heh heh sry there i just havent had my daily full of lemons ^_^; well i cant wait for your next updates

luv ya ja ne ~Aka

Oh Wow... *tries to hold back a flood of tears* You really know how to pour the angst on, don\'t you? When I discovered your story, I was hooked instantly, and I read all the chapters you had posted. I\'d like to give Dee a good butt kicking, but Bikky beat me too it. I hope that something good comes out of all that heart ache you\'ve got them into. Seee ya when you update next!

-Analia

Now, that Dee is there and is helping Ryo, what will he do next? Will Ryo forgive him? Hurry with the next chapteXZa

wanna have more!! Please update soon!! ^o^ Poor Ryo, what is Dee going to do to make it up to him?

That was good. I loved the scene with Bikky and Dee. It\'s a bit hard to picture Ryo with facial hair. But it was easy to picture him all depressed and tired and unfed. I love it. Dee picking him up and carrying him to the shower. Very nice. I hope things work out. But not to easily. There\'s got to be some rough patches one their way to recovery. So good. So good. *sits on the floor and waits for the next chapter*

Damn damn damn. The site didn\'t post my last review. Anyway, you didn\'t need to offer anrt ort of explanation to me. I understand completely, as I have been there many times before. I wasn\'t really thinking about the fact that Dee cut Ryo off several times when I wrote that last review. I was just basically wondering \'aloud\'...sorry if it seemed as if I was leaving negative feedback of some sort. I have not been disappointed with the fic at all, trust me. :) You\'ve done a beautiful job thus far.

Wow. Really liked how you revealed the times that Ryo had actually admitted that he wasn\'t at fault or it wasn\hat hat it seemed. I think you did an excellent job though making it portrayed as such that his confessions kind of went unnoticed if one wasn\'t paying attention to it. I think the reaction Bikky gave would probably have been the one he really would have had. I don\'t know if I could have been so self controlled as Dee, but I think he\'s doing a good job at trying to do something. Still hoping things work out between the two.