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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! You know.. I guessed it right! Before you write this chapter, I thought that Ryo must have been doing something with Arnon, like making a painting or something!! Yippee! Got it right!! I;m so glad Ryo isn\'t cheating on Dee... (phew) I did not manage to guess that Arnon had the hots for Dee though.... Anyway.. I love this chapter!! Looking forward to your next installment! Hurry up!!!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, when I thought that that chapter was the end...Waaaahhhhhh!-But no, there are a few more chapters left, thank goodness. I really, really loved this part. I had suspected something of the sort because, let\'s face it, Ryo\'s not someone who would cheat on a lover, particularly someone like Dee. I think the time when Dee finally saw all of the pain that he has caused Ryo was just utterly hbreabreaking. Still, I think that all of this was quite a possible thing to occur, considering how Dee tends to overreact. Wonderful chapter (wonderful story!), and please update with more chappie\'s soon!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I guessed right! *dances* Great job! I can\'t wait to see what happens in the next two chapters!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was right...at least I thought it would have t som something with art. Heh, turns out that Ryo was innocent after all. What a hard thing to swallow, thinking you\'re so right about something and finding out that it was wrong even though all the evidence seemed to point that way. Bad, Dee, not giving a chance to listen to Ryo, when there were times that he did say you were wrong, and that he didn\'t.... Now, it\'s Dee\'s turn to grovel - if he feels worthy enough to be with Ryo, and if Ryo will even consider his apology.... Can\'t wait to see what\'s gonna happen....!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! update very soon please!! Update ^o^
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I\'m so proud of you! You did such an amazing job with this chapter and the whole situation! I love the way you had Armon show Dee the portrait and the fact that Ryo didn\'t have to. It was perfect. Really high quality.
And yeah, I knew before you told me, but that doesn\'t mean it was any less wonderful!
To me, the true climax will be when Dee apoligizes to Ryo so hurry it up!
MUST HAVE THE SWEETNESS TO COUNTER BALANCE THE ANGST!
And yeah, I knew before you told me, but that doesn\'t mean it was any less wonderful!
To me, the true climax will be when Dee apoligizes to Ryo so hurry it up!
MUST HAVE THE SWEETNESS TO COUNTER BALANCE THE ANGST!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'M CRYING AND I\'M NOT HAPPY! I finally know now! Gosh, how could I not of seen it in the beginning, it was in the title for gawd\'s sake! Maybe I\'m just too dense to realize that Armon was a freakin\' artist! BUT, it did hit me before I actually read the part where you revealed what he was. I knew it...I knew it was going to be one of those damn fanfictions that have you running everywhere until you realize that the answer was just right there...it\'s such a shame, and I was the one RUNNING dammit! Hhahahhahahahha I\'m glad I crack you up! Heck, I crack myself up sometimes and it\'s good you gave Derek a warning...I\'m still going to cap his ass either way. Disrespecting my Ryo, that punk ass...who does he think he is? Anyways, I\'m all teary-eyed and boogery right now...I can\'t even think straight and it\'s all your FAULT! Have no fear, I still LOVE ya! *Nods head and clenches fist in victory* I\'m ready for YOUR challenges so brace yourself and bring it on! Yeah! Hahhahhahahhaha *^-^*
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did not guess this was the reason Ryo was at Armon\'s.... However the clue has been infront of me all along in the title --> \"Portrait\".
Hopefully your story will keep on going. It\'s been enjoyable and most realistic. (Yep, my experience with being betrayed by a loved one has run pretty much along the same lines...)
Hopefully your story will keep on going. It\'s been enjoyable and most realistic. (Yep, my experience with being betrayed by a loved one has run pretty much along the same lines...)
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
go friggin\' figure! i cant believe it, nothing happend! and i cant wait till the next chappie. sry i havnt review in so long computers a butt and ive been busy. btw THANKS FOR KEEPING ME UP WAAAAAAY PAST ME BED TIME! ^_^ i have school in the morning so i better go to sleep like the good little girl i am, hehehehehe riiiiiiiiiiiight. anyway i didnt really figure it out cause i really sux at that kinda thing, so just keep those chapters coming. i\'ll be here! ja ne.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the fact that he was having a portrait done was fairly obvious. I just couldn\'t figure why why Ryo didn\'t tell Dee in the first place...
But anyway, wonderful job as always!
But anyway, wonderful job as always!