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Hahaha! I knew it had something to do with a picture or painting! (Portrait!) And I\'m glad that you had someone else coming to Dee to make him see that he was wrong. I was going to call Dee a dumb-ass and in a way he was a bit, but it really believed he was betrayed so I can\'t say that. He didn\'t \'jump\' to conclusions and blame Ryo, he \'caught\' Ryo naked kissing, he followed him and watched him adjusting clothing when he left, he was giving excuse to cover where Ryo went.... so.... Yeah, I liked that you had Dee realize all the times that Ryo HAD tried to say something and he cut him off or ignored him. Now I guess I\'ve got to wait to see just what Dee\'s going to do to make up with Ryo if he can, huh....

Oh, I definitely think it was worth it to find out. I love your descriptions!! Had me on the verge of tears. Poor Dee!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!! ^_^

At last we know what happened! But, what will Dee do now that he does know? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Man you really know how to pull the emotions out of people. Excellent chapter! I still adore Dee and always will. I know that his actions are due to his pain and as a way to protect himself from even further pain, that\'s understandable. After all, when we hurt we don\'t think on a rational level and you\'ve captured that throughout thtorytory. It just drives me nuts that Dee has never given Ryo the chance to explain himself, and that may be due to Dee\'s personality of being blunt, honest and stubborn. You have done such a great job with this storyline and it\'s such a refreshing break from the \'Dee sees Ryo, Ryo runs away, Dee catches Ryo, they fall in love\' scenario. Thank you! I applaud you for such an exceptionally written story and will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

It\'s getting happier. *smile* I actually wanted to cry. I love Dee\'s reaction to the picture. He was like he was mentally kicking his own ass. I hope Ryo\'s going to be okay. I love the whole thing with the picture. That was great. I am a big fan of the Drama. Awaiting the next chapter.

AW! I\'m loving this!! The DRAMA!! I have a feeling it\'s not going to get happier any time soon. Keep it up!!!

Poor Dee...Poor Ryo...I\'m not gonna stand up for this anymore! They should just seperate and go their own ways! If it\'s going to hurt this much, I\'m never gonna read another lovey-dovey or heart breaking Ryo and Dee story ever again!!! I\'m losing it...hahhahahhaha I wish I could do that, but I love those two! So, whatever happens, happens...just as long as Derek doesn\'t get any action, I\'m pretty much happy! *hides on top of a building with a sniper rifle* So, since you are the author I\'d like you to have the honors of giving Derek fair warning. You go and tell him that if he tries anything funny, his ass is capped, got it? Hahahhahhaha I\'m such a nerd! But anyways, thanks four sur support! I\'m updating all my stories by writing them on paper which is a pain and then going to the public library and typing it all there and not to mention, uploading. I finished chapter 5 to Dee\'s Grimm Fairy Tales, so go check it out!
Kit_Yang

I\'m looking forward to see how this will end. Of course, I\'d love for Dee and Ryo to patch things up, and part of me hopes that will happen. But...at the same time a sad ending would be an interesting twist in the world of FAKE fanfiction. Whatever you\'ve decided, I\'m sure it\'ll be great!

OMG I LOVE THIS....you rarely find any of these online...very well written *claps*....have Ryo try to kill himself...but not succeed...and leave behind a really sad note for Dee....that\'ll make him feel bad...hehehe....*is an evil bitch*....ok...keep writing!

Does that mean Dee didn\'t do anything with Derek? Seems he didn\'t go out on the town after all. Kind of endearing (sorry can\'t think of another word except stalker, but I don\'t want it to be that) even though he won\'t allow himself to be with Ryo (or visa versa) to still have the need to be somewhat close to him (it being their anniversary after all). Ryo\'s like a little puppy that I just want to scoop up and cuddle him myself.... hummm... I\'d want to do that even if he wasn\'t grieving as he is. ^_^ And Bikky! I like that he has feelings on both sides. I know the manga has him mostly, usually fighting with Dee or foiling his plans to be with Ryo, but there are times that there\'s other thoughts about the man, after all Dee has helped save him a few times too.

Yes, I babble (alot) sometimes ^_^! Anyway do love your story. Waiting patiently (biting fingernails) for your next chapter.....