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WOW! That was short but oh so lovely. I\'m SO ready for them to finally be together!!! Although that undoubtedly will bring the end to this awesome fic. How bitter sweet. Keep updating when you can!

And again, when you finish this one, start another!! You\'re so talented! Don\'t stop!

:-D

Wow...Dee\'s about ready to give in! I hope he and Ryo talk it through and that everything works out! It has to end happily...it just has to! *cry* Another great job! I anxiously await the next chapter! :D

Could it be that Dee is willing to listen to Ryo and forgive him? I hope so!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!

I loved the title! Separate Together. Each one involved in their own \'grief\' or \'loneliness\', yet they were actually there doing it with each other. Kind of like \"So near, yet still so far away\". So Dee\'s night on the town wound up sitting around nearby Ryo\'s place, yet couldn\'t bring himself to go to him, huh? Or was there time to have fooled around with that Derek guy and that\'s just were he wound up? I tend to think he skipped out on Derek. I like what you\'re writing with Bikky too. Be waiting for your next update.....

And your choice is....bum bum bum *you know, drums beating...hehehhehe* DUCK!!!! NO! Damn that Derek! I will chew him up and spit him out if he dares to take Dee from Ryo! I\'m so mad! *heavy breathing* okay, okay..whew! It was sad at the end though! I cried, again! I hate myself! And THANK YOU for actually feeling sorry for me! I think you\'re the only one so far! I hate my computer! I wish I could smash it all up again! But have no FEAR! I will find a way to update my chapters, dammit! Sheesh, is it just me or do I souike ike I\'m complaining? Must be me...Here\'s the good news though, I\'m almost finished with my fifth chapter so I just have to find a way to upload it...anyways, sorry for blabbering...once again, GREAT JOB KID....I dig it! Hahhahhahahhah *^-^*
Kit_Yang

OOH! Why do you torture Ryo so? *pouts* Awaiting the next chapter. Please get happy soon! Please!!!! Oh the Drama!!! I loving this!

Thanks for posting so many new chapters. I\'m really enjoying this story. I hope it has a happy ending (hint! hint!). I usually love a good angsty romance but, right now, I could use a little \"sunshine\" too. Why doesn\'t that Armon guy speak up? Can\'t he figure out something1s wrong with Ryo? If he\'s a friend of Ryo\'s I would think he would want to help him out of this mess. Oh, well, you\'re the author so keep up the good work. I\'m loo for forward to the next chapter. ^ _ ^

;_; WAHHHH so sad poor ryo. damn dee for not listening >=( heh obvious ryo fan here ^o^

*looks around suspiciously* My computer crashed, so I had to use my dad\'s to read this. *sniffle* So sad...Ryo was so close to revealing his secret! ;_; The suspense is still killing me! Hurry with the next chapter soon!

This is terrible. I feel more sorry for Ryo. I have an idea about the story, but I won\'t tell. I can full-hearted understand with Dee\'s feelings and position. Whether having a hard past or not, when a person opens themselves up to another person, they can be hurt very, very deeply by scenes that he walked into and saw, plus his suspions(?) seemed to be confirmed. Even if a person totally trusts another, I don\'t think that anyone out there can truly say if certain \'facts\', \'circumstances\', or such came to light that they wouldn\'t be wondering also. Some might not take the initative to actually follow or walk in, but there are those that would. Dee realized that what Ryo was telling him was a bit shaky, even covered up, even though you didn\'t mention him directly saying \'where the f* were you at (or did you go)?). Dee felt betrayed, hurt, and he struggled to go through the next day the best way he could. People either cry and/or beg and walk around like living dead, or they become defensive, rejecting, even cruel. Dee\'s a hardened tuffy, and I believe the qualities that he\'s been displaying fit, especially since he had left himself so open to be so wounded.

But then you have lovable Ryo, hurting so much! And with the gentler side (even being male as he is) you\'ve made it where you just want bully Dee to give in. You\'ve given him the pitying emotions whereas Dee has the stay-strong ones. I stand by Dee (hiding my face when he\'s tauntingly mean) because in the story it reads that he\'s the one wronged. But my tears are for for for the sorrow he\'s going through. I just want to drag Dee over and say, don\'t you see how much pain he\'s in? Please give him a chance (if only the one)!

The new partner thing. I\'m kind of glad that you did not write a whole lot on their relatiop dap day-in-day-out, skimming the weeks by, allowing the readers to know that the partnership is there, but leaves it distant to not know the character well enough to be attached to - if I\'ve said that right.

Well, I\'ve really blabbed my mouth. Sorry. Just felt I had to write something about the green-eyed guy to let known that his pain should be considered just as much. Cannot wait until the next chapter, so we all know for sure what\'s going on.