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I guess Ryo really has lost Dee. I feel so bad for him. Awaiting the next chapter!!

Poor Ryo. Poor Dee.

There can\'t be anything Ryo can say to overcome his screwup.

You bet I\'m still with this! I just love it! Dee is such an ass sometimes, but understandable none the less. YAY! I can just smell an exciting climax coming around the corner. OOHHHH!! The wait is unbearable!

MUST KEEP UPDATING ASAP!!

I really want to give Dee a nice good punch on his face.. Why couldn\'t he listens to Ryo? Damn it.. Shit.. I\'m taking it too personal.. Hey... keep udating!

WOW! Damn you just keep cranking out the angst and I keep yanking out the tissues! *sniffles* I feel so bad for Ryo right now. And Dee... Well I want to smack him upside the head! That was just plain cruel, no matter how much he might think Ryo deserved it! *Glares at Dee* Going through a break up myself has me feeling very closely connected to this story.an\'an\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work. *Grabs another tissue*

Yep, I\'m here. Been patiently waiting. Read it...hummm...what to say? Poor Ryo, despite feelings and reasons Dee has. Oh, God, that sounds like my ex-boyfriend. He does me wrong (more times than a person could count actually) and I\'m left dealing, trying to block out feelings to stay strong to on on with \'functioning\', and he gets the pity. Somehow I think there\'s more to the story than has been let on, which makes me feel for Ryo. It\'s like he\'s the one really getting hurt. Dee was actually being... can\'t think of the word but whatever it is it\'s more deliberate. Are you really going to have Dee fooling around with that other guy? That was too cruel when he winked and said Fairs fair. Dee had said in the beginning that he didn\'t want to hear excuses...another thing my ex would say.... and Ryo doesn\'t get too many whole sentences out...YES, and don\'t anyone out there say that can\'t be real, because IT CAN BE... I\'ve gone through it myself!!!! You start to say something and you get cut off, you start to say some again (which can be a bit different than before) and get cut off again. Before you know it, there\'s been a lot spoken, but nothing said..yep, yep..

I really liked the Bikky scene. Tender moment between the two. I know that in the book Dee and Bikky don\'t get alone that well, but sometimes from the beginning of the book it was Deet ket kept him safe and hauling him out of the house. Later Dee made sure that Bikky was safe when there was a bomb. I think that once the two men really committed to each other, Bikky also calmed a bit even though they don\'t show it in the book. So I can see the kid making comparisons of Dee being gone an eternity, I can see him upset for Ryo\'s pain, and I can see him comforting Ryo like that because he knows it matters to his \'adoptive\' father. So don\'t take no guff from people thinking that wouldn\'t be right!

Well, there\'s my opinion. Sorry, I kind of do it sometimes with authors when I write a review. Looking forward to your next chapter....

Wow, I\'m impressed with the fact that you\'re writing something out of the ordinary and doing such a good job with it!!! I can\'t wait to see which direction is is going to go in!!! Keep up the good work and good luck!!!! ^_______^

Gomen!! have not been logging on for a while.. Damn... this is painful!!! Please... when are you ending the torture>?

So that was Dee\'s reaction? Understandable, but I still want to know why Ryo did what he did and can he win Dee back? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Aww geeeezz! *bangs head against wall in frustration* Another cliffhanger!?! *sniffs* you\'re so cruel to us. *sighs* okay, keep going, you know you\'ve got us by the short hairs here...*wanders off grumbling*