rate_review Reviews

The one thing that stands out... What Ryo wrote on that paper! That got to me! This story has me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what else is going to happen. As for the \'bitch slap\' we Ronin Warrior/ Samurai Trooper fans know that one all too well. *laughs*

Anyway, keep up the awesome work... I\'m looking forward to the next chapters!

Ouch! Poor Dee. I can understand about him not wanting to let go and hurting, but since he believes Ryo\'s betrayed him he\'s pushing (or running, whichever you want to think it) away and using a bit of anger? to throw back from his pain. I\'ve seen people do that. I don\'t think it would be too out of character to feel and act that way. Dee can be sensitive and caring, but he can be brass and obnoxious and \'loud\'. Still love him though. Loved how you explained what happened that got Ryo in trouble. Ha! Dee!

Really loved the note part when he had wrote YOU as to what was gone and Ryo wanted back. That was.... profound(?)
Well, I will be waiting to read when you get the next one up....
Great story. Been loving it - even hurting as I have.

Lots and lots of Dee and Ryo angst! I didn\'t know Ryo had it in him to slap Dee like that! *is shocked* *sniff* This story is still incredibly sad, and I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Hurry!!! Oh, yes, and don\'t worry, I won\'t reveal my guess...I\'ll just wait patiently in suspense to see if I\'m right. :D Keep up the good work! :D
~JazzyGirl~

Must... have... more... *eyes glaze over*

Well... even though I could have guessed what was on the note Ryo gave to Dee in the last chapter, I still cried when it said \"YOU\". How sweet! Dee, what a hottie. *swoon* All this angst is just going to make the get together (if there is one *crosses fingers*) even better. The harder they fall the better it is when they make up! I\'m just so pleased there are no words. *cheers madly*

More power to you to include a juicy lemon in the end, ne? :-D

The move. The key. The bitch-slap. The NOTE! It was all good. I was right on the note thingy, hehehehe!!! I fig Ryo Ryo would do something like that as Dee is still really important to him, despite clobbering him! (that was an oh, so good one!). Please keep up the good writing on his story. Now we have Ryo\'s and Dee\'s musings (so to speak) and your next chapter is going to be New Partner... god, just what will come of that one?
way,way, I\'ll probably be here waiting to read more once you get it up.

This isn\'t cool man...I\'m on the edge of my seat!!!! And damn, that was an awesome bitch slap! I was like, Go Ryo! Don\'t take crap from Dee even though you did mess everything up! But yes, I\'m so proud of myself! I DIDN\'T CRY ONCE!!! WHOO-HOO!!! I\'m gonna go celebrate with some milk and cookies!!! ~does the cabbage patch~ *^-^*
Kit_Yang

AAAHH! I love it! The drama! The drama! Update soon!!!

I think I got it!!!! I think I friggin\' got it!!! I know what\'s gonna happen!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

You\'re a GENIUS!! BRILLIANT!!! WHAT A PLOT! OMG! OMG! OMG!

YES YES YES!! I JUST CAN\'T HOLD IN MY EXCITEMENT!!!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! MUST READ THE END... MUST READ THE END...

*shakes computer violently*

Darn it, what is there left for me to say? I like how you go back and retell the story with the other\'s view point. You just see Dee\'s actions with Ryo being the one suffering. And now get get to see what\'s going on with Dee too and understand that he\'s just not turned his back on Ryo, it\'s because he\'s dealing with the hurt he feels too. Especially feeling that he\'s been betrayed like that. I caught mine like that before, and it hurt real bad, but I should have been more resistant instead of giving in so easy.

Well, I\'ll be waiting for your next chapter....

Will Dee and Ryo ever make up? Hurry with the next chapter!!