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for Portrait Without Sin

by animeyaoi

person Kit_Yang
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, my heart is breaking into a thousand pieces...I CAN\'T TAKE ANYMORE!!!!! It\'s too much to take on! Oh the burden! I will be alright though...I\'ll just find a needle and thread and mend my heart along the way, to the very end! Til then, I shall await for you update!
Kit_Yang
person Darcy
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your fiction. I must admit, I\'d love to see more to it. But I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading it. Fantastic.
person Nautica
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is definately more right?
I know you said this was different from the beginning, but I surely hope there is still a happy ending.
I truly didn\'t think Ryo would cheat on Dee, and I\'m still clinging to a faint hope that it was all a misunderstanding...
Keep writing! Anxious fans are awaiting! :)
person Devi
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god, I try never to take fanfiction seriously, but if the conclusion doesn\'t end with \'and they lived happily ever after\', I\'ll go insane! Hurry with the next chapter!
person KD
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I nearly cried!!! It\'s really painful to see Ryo like that... Please tell me you\'re not breaking them up!! I\'ll definitely cry!
person berner rat killer (laura)
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Listen I really hope that you are going to update very soon. I can\'t wait for the end!
person Someone Out There
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI\'mI\'m still here. In and out, but still reading. Internet giving me a fit, but anyway... God, when it decided to rain it\'s just poured, huh? And I mean down pour! Poor guy. Feeling sorry for Ryo a bit, the guy seems to be hurting too. Anyway, please keep up the story. I\'ll be waiting to read.
person Someone Out There
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cried when he was thinking about Dee sitting there looking at the picture and crying. I loved the part where Dee was giving him back his apartment key. I wondered what happened that got them in trouble or rather Ryo almost in trouble. But I think I can guess that he punched, slapped or tackled him after the give me back my car key thing. Ha! I could just see them all in the office! Poor Ryo, he\'s losing everything, huh?
person Raining_like_tears
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Ryo\'s getting knocked with one to another thing, that it makes you start to feel sorry for him too. Almost hate to see what\'s going to happen next, but can\'t stop reading. Gut wrenching stuff. I want my pillow! Please update soon as possible.
person Someone Out There
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sorry, wasn\'t finished. Also the part of gi Dee Dee that note. You going to tell what was on it. Bet I know from him crumbling it up and throwing it away as to what was on it! Anyway, glad to know your going to do some on Dee now. Hope to be reading you soon again.

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