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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say about this story is WOW! You did a really amazing job in writing this story. I think you\'ve taken me through nearly every course of emotion there was. I started reading your story elsewhere but came across it here. I am sooo glad that I checked into it. This is a story that hasn\'t disappointed me, and those lemons... God! Just about had to turn on the fan in the middle of winter. Really fantastic job! I\'m looking forward to another chapter since it seems you left it open for there to be one!
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It surprised me to see this delightful story is back. 8-) I enjoyed this chapter...talk about hot, yet very loving and sweet. A good combination in my opinion.
Keep on writing (this story and others). You\'ve got a real gift for writing realistic stories with well developed plots and characters. 8-)
Keep on writing (this story and others). You\'ve got a real gift for writing realistic stories with well developed plots and characters. 8-)
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written and I enjoy reading it. Its really sad and angsty, but I hope you put in a happy ending. (I'm on chapter 2) You truly have the gift of words! ^_^
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Awes!! H!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to to tell you how much I have enjoyed your story. I have only just found \"fanfiction\" and have been having a blast reading it. When I started yours I found it compelling. I know you said that you thought they may be OOC, but I don\'t really think so. It all flows very naturally to me. I can see them acting in that manner.I check the site everyday in hopes of seeing the nchapchapter. Thank you for a wounderfully realistic and deep story. I turly like how you have doled out little bits of info a chapter at a time. It keeps the reader guessing as to who did what or who \"is in the wroung\" so to speak.
Felicia
Felicia
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I decided to read you fic over again. It still gets me. This is such a great story. Espiecally the first chapter. It\'s like a big slap in the face. You think\'s it\'s going to be all happy and flowers, and then you walk into a daytime soap. I just can\'t get over on how good this is. Please update soon! I\'m getting ansty waiting to see what happens. SQUEE!
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my god, that was so increadibly sweet! I\'m so happy that you got Dee and Ryo back togeather, and that everything is going to work out for them. I\'m also really glad that you posted this follow up chapter too. I can never get enough of reading your stories. I rly rly await your next post!
P.S. Don\'t worry, I won\'t put away my writings. I don\'t think I could live with out writing something. I also have my own FAKe fanfic that is in the works, but I\'m a little bit stuck with writer\'s block. I should be ready to post the first chapter of is sometime soon. (Which means anywhere from a week to two months from now!)
--Analia
P.S. Don\'t worry, I won\'t put away my writings. I don\'t think I could live with out writing something. I also have my own FAKe fanfic that is in the works, but I\'m a little bit stuck with writer\'s block. I should be ready to post the first chapter of is sometime soon. (Which means anywhere from a week to two months from now!)
--Analia
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mwa ha ha ha ha ha!!!! Just finished Chapter 17, I love this, it\'s so sweet!!! I can really see Dee doing something like this. I ca wai wait to see how you end this story. And I know I get a little hung up on this but I really do love the way that yove wve written Bikky in this. He is so perfectly in character and you hardly ever see authors manage to capture him correctly, you channel him VERY well. Anyway, looking forward to seeing this completed!!! Good luck and post soon!!!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I just got done reading part ten and I liked it! I think it\'s great and fits very well with the rest of the story. On to the next chapter...
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After reading chapter 11 all I can say is WOW. It\'s perfect and sweet and yet at the same time takes me back to all the times my friends and I have had to do that sort of things for girlfriends who got dumped and boyfriend who got too trashed the night before, so I\'m totally identifying with Dere.ere. And the way youve written Bikky is totally in character for him I believe. Actually, I think for this chapter he\'s my favorite character.