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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no, you are killing me here. Please update soon. I need to go get more tissues....hic hic.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away tears* How sad...poor Ryo...poor Dee...and stupid Berkeley for being such an ass when he knows how much Ryo is hurting! *kicks the stupid Commissioner* Hope to see the next chapter soon...I\'m on the edge of my seat here!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I... can\'t... even... type right now. I starting crying at the start and I just got louder as I got sadder. Wow. This kind of angst just kills me. *sobs* I\'m gonna have to go read something happy now to counter balance. But anyways...
Nice Work indeed! I think Ryo\'s affair as a whole might be out of character but I think Dee is definitely on target.
Can\'t supress my utter thafor for writing this fic!!!!! It had to be written and I\'m so grateful it happened to be you!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
Nice Work indeed! I think Ryo\'s affair as a whole might be out of character but I think Dee is definitely on target.
Can\'t supress my utter thafor for writing this fic!!!!! It had to be written and I\'m so grateful it happened to be you!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t see how those two are ever gonna make up. Awaiting the next chapter!!!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how much longer can can deal with this without having to talk to Dee to tell him what happened, why, and how much he loves Dee. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this from the beginning, but only just began to review. Great, great job!!!!! Ooh, I can\'t wait to see what happens!!! You have me in major suspense here! Poor Dee and Ryo!!! ;_; I hope everything works out and they get back together! Please post the next chapter soon!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, how could you end there? I\'ve got tears in my eyes...please continue soon!
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no, no, no, no. Please don\'t end it there. The suspense is killing me. Even when I knew I had chapters still to read it was too slow to get to the next chapter. There have been very few stories that I\'ve read that have made me cry. This one is one of them. You are going to explain why all this is happening right? oh please say you are. i couldn\'t stand it if you didn\'t. I really like how you have put a different type of story together. Most FAKE stories are how much Ryo and Dee are in love with each other and how perfect their life is. It is rare to see angst like this, very refreshing. I don\'t know what else I can say to encourage you to finish this story without delay, even if it ends up horrible for Ryo and Dee. I need a conclusion to this. Please get another chapter up soon. I can\'t wait to read more.
your humble reader,
shinimegami
your humble reader,
shinimegami
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES!! Angst! I love it! Poor Dee! He\'s gone through the mill this time. I didn\'t know Ryo could be such a slut! I don\'t think that\'s terribly funny but just the situation is so... unique? I\'m starting to feel that Dee really does have a point in the way he treats Ryo. Anyways, I\'ll keep on reviewing as long as you keep writing so update whenever you can, ne?
I also think the fact that you respond to your reviews is really touching. It shows you care. Awesome babe! ;-)
I also think the fact that you respond to your reviews is really touching. It shows you care. Awesome babe! ;-)
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am crying my eyes out!!! This is so freakin\' sad...I want to just bang my head against the table and end all this torture! Oh the pain!!! *one hand over my heart, the other reaching out* by the by, thanks for reading Fallen...you weren\'t the only one...heck, I was pulling my hair out AND crying every chapter!
Kit_Yang
Kit_Yang