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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I can kind of see where you\'re going with this, but hey, I could come out surprised. Great fanfic, and nice writing style. I\'m interested in the reading next chapter.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy... Chapter 2 is even more exciting! Well, truth be told I almost didn\'t want to know what Ryo was doing or why Dee was acting like that, but now I\'m just dying with suspense. You\'ve got a good story going on here. I\'ve really never seen a fanfiction like this oneblasblast it to its full potential. Make the journey just as good as the end!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GAWK* *strangling sounds coming out of throat* I can\'t imagine Ryo being unfaithful to Dee or visa-versa, but hey, these are fanfic\'s aren\'t they? Can\'t be any stranger than r onr ones. But then again, life sucks sometimes and you get slapped up with something totally unexpected - and things like this happen! Poor Dee! I can\'t wait to read your next chapter. I hope things work out for the two in the end, though something like unfaithfulness is hard to forgive and get over to completely except that person into your life again like that.
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm... wow. As much as Dee had pursued Ryo, finally catching him, and the relationship the two developed, I could actually see Dee exploding like that somewhat. I\'ve read a lot of fanfiction of these two, and I don\'t think that I\'ve come across any that\'s had this kind of theme to it. I think Ie ane an idea of what you\'re going to do with this story, but I think I\'ll keep my mouth shut with this one for now.
I can\'t wait to read more! My guts are turning into little knots so please hurry... I love my guys and something like this would hurt realld! Sd!
I can\'t wait to read more! My guts are turning into little knots so please hurry... I love my guys and something like this would hurt realld! Sd!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must say tthisthis wasn\'t what I was expecting but... I\'m eagerly awaiting to see what is going to happen. I couldn\'t believe Ryo would do something like that but hey, you warned me.
I\'m in full support of this fic and demand it updated soon!
Just don\'t make Dee *too* violent \'kay? Let\'s hope he still loves him, even if it is just a little bit :-)
I\'m in full support of this fic and demand it updated soon!
Just don\'t make Dee *too* violent \'kay? Let\'s hope he still loves him, even if it is just a little bit :-)
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March 1, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Wowzer...that was HOT *^-^* I was totally waiting to see what would happen between Dee and Ryo...you know, make up conversation and then you threw in that yummy LEMON scene and totally took me off track...THANKS! I needed a break! hahhahaahha well, I\'m sorry for threatening you...I just had to do something to make sure you didn\'t catch WRITER\'S BLOCK which has been spreading around the internet...but, if it makes you feel better I will gladly put down my swords and bombs, give you a break, and review like normal people. *Waves a white flag amongst the battlefield* I surrender, I give up...++