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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! HA HA AHA HAAAAA!!! Sweet fluffines and forgiveness YOU ROCK!! ahem, moving on.....

Sorry.. didn\'t leave a review when I first read this, but I\'m here now. And I have to say WOW! I loved how Dee studied Ryo while he slept, and how he -- *snicker* -- aroused him up. That would fit Dee I think. He can jump his bone in a subtle way too! You have a wonder way of writing description that it really draws a person into the story itself... almost too much because then I wish I was one or the other right then! Ooops... maybe that was too much to say but what the hell! Many thanks that you decided to add that chapter to sto story for not having updated sooner. I realized something must be up to keep you from posting or you would have. You\'ve been so good about it before. But that chapter will tie me over for now until you post again.... Be looking out for ya!

\'Haharma\' - clears throat. GOOOOO DEEEEEE!!!! HA! I wouldn\'t have really expect less from him at the moment! Really nice. Thank you, thank you for putting this chapter up. I was worried for a while that you were abandoning it. I\'m glad that you felt you owed us something because this was terrific! Bet you can\'t tell that I like this story! You are one of my favorite authors in writing fanfic! Please continue to write more!

when i read the summary i wasn\'t into what it was about but i saw how many reviews it had so I went there. that was interesting. so many great reviews i had to check out the story myself. the first couple of chapters i read i thought yeah this was gonna be one of those cheat on me cheat on you stories but the third chapter -- and i have to say great a/n comment too -- really captured me into reading the next chapter. i just fell into the same trap everyone else seems to have with thiory.ory. it was captivating. intense. painful! i stopped laughing at other people commenting on how much it made them cry. my own eyes welded up with tears! by the time i got to those last few chapters i was SO ready for them! and the intensity that i found in the lemons you wrote was sheer wonderful.

this story was truly amazing! O_O i give you my apologizes for brushing this story off and not intend to give it any merit. goes to show you can\'t judge a book by the cover -- i can say that here for this right? anyway i will definitely be keeping tabs of your story to see when you update again. sorry this was so long but i was really surprised. total thumbs up!

Great to see another excellent chapter posted. The yaoi scenes between Dee and Ryo are always so sweet yet sssooo sexy. I\'ve enjoyed reading each and every chapter, even the truly angsty ones. These two were meant to be together forever. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

YES!! I knew you wouldn\'t give up on us. Been waiting patiently... with a capital \'P\' as Armon might put it. Haha. Even though this wasn\'t the conclusion of your story, it was very much enjoyed... and appreciated... I will be here for your none.one...

And you were going to keep this away from us?! I\'m glad that you thought to put it up for us. Nice touch to end the night. Wonderfully explicit. I like how Dee enjoys \ing ing care\' of Ryo. *fanning self * They both need as much loving as possible for what they went through.... please update again... as soon as you can.

Between waiting for an update and AFF being down it\'s been pretty frustrating! But you came up with a wonderful part to end that, so I forgive you. That question at the end worries me though... *fear of angst going to rear its ugly head* and the ending is so, so close.... don\'t tell me that after all the gut wrenching angst, and get together loving that you\'re going to pull something on us after all? I - would - die!

Well, I loved the way you depicted the setting of the lemon for this chapter (17), and how Dee weened his way into Ryo\'s dream state. Beautiful job.... I love your lemons... they are sweet as lemon-aid with a whole bag of sugar in it.

I\'m so glad that Ryo and Dee are back together again!! Wonderful story!!

That is one great hot ending! Thank you. I can now save the complete story in my favorite fanfic folder. I am looking forward to your other story, \"Wake Me When Death Comes.\" Thanks again.