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for Portrait Without Sin

by animeyaoi

person Ladagonagonphire
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW - fabulous story! A great combination of heartfelt angst, drama, and true love - deliciously well-written. Absolutely amazing. You are an extremely talented writer. The lemon scenes were to die for - Dee and Ryo were totally SEXY and the emotion conveyed within the scenes complimented and added to the overwhelming power of the addicting plot-driven story. Keep up the FANTASTIC writing! :)
person Julia
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was hot and sweet at the same time. I\'m glad yostedsted it. It was really good. I espiecally like the end. Wonder what\'s going to happen next. You can\'t end it yet. It\'s still gettin good.
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! I sat there during the first part screming at the computer that Arnon(?) had better not have been with Ryo or else. I was so happy when everything worked out in the end I jumped up and down squealing like a crazy fangirl! Oh I am so happy!!!!!! Ryo/Dee are so awesome!
person AkaTsuki
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beutiful my dear just beutiful i luv how you described Ryo in the beggining and the way you had Dee wake Ryo up hehe luverly story

~Aka
person aspiker
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a sweet lemon. Tender and loving. 8-) It fits well with Dee and Ryo starting to gingerly taking the first steps towards being a couple again....
person PocketFox
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. This is just beautiful! Normally I don\'t read chaptered fics, but this one just pulled me in and wouldn\'t let me go until I finished it, even though it\'s after three in the morning.asioasionally the language seemed a little stilted or the grammar was a bit off, but this was so entrancing the little mistakes were easily ignored. It was refreshing in a way to find a Dee/Ryo fic that wasn\'t all happy fluffy, but I\'m still so glad they worked things out! It\'s just wonderful! And I love the way you wrote Dee and Ryo -- I actually can see Dee ovectincting like he did and refusing to listen to Ryo, and I can see Ryo trying and trying to talkhim him before finally retreating into a depression. This story is definitely one of my favorites now!
person wildefyre
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! I can actually get the review thingie to show!!! *Jumps for Joy* Oh... The review... Yeah... Just a sec, need to crank up the AC because it got hot in here all of a sudden! *Fans self* Damn and here I am estranged from the hubs for over a year! Talk about torture! Okay, this was hot hot hot! Me liked! *Grins foolishly* You write a mean lemon! Man oh man! (Or as in this case... man on man) I think I\'ll leave the lemons to you for now on... shoot! I\'m glad I finally got to read the rest of this and I am looking forward to reading more. Awesome job!!!
person Anrui
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this and I can\'t wait untill your next fic comes out. I had to wait awhile untill I could read this chapter *because myputeputer hates me* but it was worth it. Thank you for writing this and let me know when your next one is up, please. OK? Killer! ^_^
Tight hug, Big kiss
Anrui
person Boricua_cet
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled upon your story today and read it all in one sitting! It made me laugh, it made me gasp, and it almost made me cry! You have a true talent here and this story is nothing short of wonderful! I really + truly LOVED all of it! I think you got the characters and emotions right on target too! Also, I can not wait for the next chapter if you do make the decision to write another!
person Akucan
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is so well told and your attention to detail is fabulous. And throughout the whole story you have managed to balance the fine line of angst without falling into mellow drama, not an easy thing to accomplish. I\'ve just recently read the manga series and your\'s is my first foray in FAKE fanfic. A good first bite I must say. I\'ve just finished reading the first 16 chapters of this story and I read them all in one sitting. Though I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed the whole story, Chapter 10 had me in tears, honestly, big ploppy tears. I was just glad there was no one else awake to see that.
Anyway like the rest of your faithful readers I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
Akuchan

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