rate_review Reviews

Wow, that was tough. U let readers hanging until the 10th CH. That what made the story different. Fortunately, I\'m a very patient and curious reader. That\'s why I keep reading it til the end, usually good writer will reveal the real conflict in the end. And I do think that u understand each chara of FAKE, your greatest points in this story are feeling and details. Man, this is one of the best fic of FAKE i\'ve read so far. U made me wanna cry, screaming, and jumping so badly. The bad thing is I\'m on a public place. So, all I could do is smilling ^.^ but I do really like ur fic. Only one thing, do u realize that u made Ryo a bit weak and too forgiveful? Shame that love made everbody change, isn\'t it? You should made longer chapter after the climax. YUMMY! oops...BUt, I\'m a big supporter for them, my wish that they are happy everafter. Hey, if u made other fics kindly inform me will you? My e-mail: spark_lens@yahoo.com

There were times I thought I was gonna die reading this, my guts were twisted so much. Really great work of a story! I really liked the twist you did there toward the end when it looked like they were going to get together, but then you held off for that extra bit of wait. Well well worth it! Those next chapters were HOT! You mentioned about \'forced to write another lemon scene\', well, I\'m twisting your arm. Would like to see what else you can come up with on this one. After all that pain and torture that they went through, I think they deserve it!

This is an incrediable story. You wrote this very well, pulling in each of their emotions that you just love, felt sorry for, and ready to knock down both of them. And as for the lemon, O_O I think you did a really good job. I like how you took it slow because that showed Dee was out for more than just something quick. Please writetherther lemon before ending this. I think there\'s more that you can put into it before the very end.

I--Think--I--Need--More. Even though there was a lot there. I\'m so happy how you wrote the scenes between Dee and Ryo! I love the way Dee\'s taking care of him. You mentioned to a reviewer about deciding the order of doing the two and if this is what you had in mind, I see how this was best. I love the way you dialog the two in banter. And the times Ryo cries... well, he does that in the book on occassion(? spelling). I like the descriptive detail you use, kind of like moment by moment play. Anyway, I for one enjoyed it. I hate to see it end if if you throw in maybe one more lemon I\'d be really happy.

Ooo... trust me.. your lemon is absolutely great! You\'re going to be the lemon goddess... haha... great story!

Just found this site really by accident and I just love it! I just started checking out different stories which this site contains and came across yours. I didn\'t know really anything about Fake, but I decided to check it out. Even not knowing these two, I have to say you drew me in until I read the entire story! This was great! The first chapter was short but it had me give it a chance through the second one. I thought wow, I\'ll just see how this develops. The third chapter started getting me in tears. You had me going at first, but then I thought that there just had to be something else that was going on. You did a great job with their emotions that you couldn\'t fault either one. And by the time you got to the last couple of chapters, I was just as ready for that to happen as any other rabid-fan. And you wrote the scenes so well. Really intense scenes, I wish I was there! After reading this one, I\'m going to check out some others here and I think I want to check out the real story as well just to see how and why these two are so knitted together. Look forward to reading more of this.

That was soooooooo good. Tenderness and sex all toer ler like that. Very nice. Is Ryo going to take Dee back? Things aren\'t going to be the same. There\'s going to be a slight difference. Can\'t wait to see how this ends. Oh, I\'m so excitied.

So you are asking if you should end here or add some more. I think that you should do it. As much as I love all your story ending it here it won\'t feel complete. So I\'m waiting for the next chapter!!

oh I love it!! I think your lemon part was perfect!! I really really enjoyed readthisthis chapter please update soon!!! ^o^

I have to say that this chapter that this chapter was really great. For a first time lemon writeu diu did a great job. You didn\'t just jump into the sex and have them going at it -- although I\'m all into that too sometimes reading -- but how you\'ve written this story, this was the way to go. In fact, you\'ve left them open yet for more reconciliation (spelling? looks weird). Lemon...anytime you want to write one! You do a very good job in detailing actions and emotions. Hate to see it end, even though I couldn\'t wait for it to all work out. Well... I will be wng fng for you next update with ending or extra lemon....