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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy shit i cant believe that was ur first lemon i luuuved it, hell ya u should continue plus u did say ud add bikky (i luv that kid! hes so cute) so its settled u will post that chr anr and we shall read n review it okai *^-^*
*till hopefully next time ~Aka
*till hopefully next time ~Aka
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story and bitchin\' lemon! It was just what was needed then --> not hard and fast, but slow, loving and tender. 8-)
I\'m looking forward to reading more. 8-)
I\'m looking forward to reading more. 8-)
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was nice and hot, but it could have been a little wild. But, other than that, it was still good.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHMYGODOHMYGODFOHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! This is the BEST freaking fanfiction in the entire WORLD! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!! This is the BEST freaking fanfiction in the entire WORLD! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I think you should continue it if you have ideas, I\'d certainly love to read it. However, if you feel it\'s finished it\'s wonderful how it is. You are really a wonderful writer.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The end made me cry. I really cried. That was so cute, you\'re so talented. You had me feeling the characters emotions, that\'s so hard to find in fanfiction. Just wow, I don\'t know what to say. But wow. Maybe I should say it again, maybe it\'ll help. Wow. Still with much loving adoration.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say...YES! And that\'s for the chapter just read. I think you should continue with whatever you have plannnd nnd not end it here, even though it did look like a gspotspot. But I think you have a bit more to pull out from your sleeve. You did promise a bit with Bikky that I\'m looking forward to. You did such a good job with him in the other chapter\'s, I like to see what yo wio with him at the ending as well. If you want to write another Lemoforefore the ending of it, I\'m all up for it, too.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry... you asked how you did on your first lemon and I think you did a pretty good job. You don\'t just write about sex, you put deep emotions into it as well. This story has been one huge emotional ride that\'s for sure. Hit people in the gut, take a knife to their heart, and then have a great way of mending things together. Love your stuff.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, son. I almost forgot. I do want more. That wobe abe a beautiful ending, but if you have a better way of finishing it, I vote for as much as you\'ll do. =)
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn\'t get to review sooner. I got freakin\' busy and haven\'t gotten back to read anything. All I can say is Dee\'s my man! He\'s really trying to see to making up to Ryo. Can\'t wait to read the next chappie. I\'m sure they\'re gonna sizzle in that one too.