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for Portrait Without Sin

by animeyaoi

person Julia
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins like a mad man* OOOO! Hot! Very hot! *eyes grow big* That was good. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. *sits on bed and waits* LA LE LA LE LA! Hot Dee and Ryo sex. Fun, fun, fun!
person Someone Out There
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!! Finally, RYO! Good Job! Loved thiapteapter too. And I really liked the way you had them communicating with each other, especially the ending part...ha! Will be waiting for MORE
person Julia
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I ly lly liked it. It wasn\'t too rused. I had to read it twice before I reviewed. Very good. Ryo and Dee actions. I like it how Ryo was the one doing the \"work\" so to say. *giggle* It was really good. YAY! I\'m on here everyday to see if you\'ve updated or not. I get so excitied when you do. I can\'t wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Update soon. *GRIN*
person berner rat killer
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are really a teser, leaving us in the middle of the best! Any way, now that I\'ve cool down a little I can tell you that: This is definetly the best fiction that I\'ve read till now. You are really a good writer and I hope to read something more from you. I\'m really looking for it.
person Yeah, So I Said
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you. <33
person Analia
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. So. EVIL!!!!!! AHHHHH!!!!!! You are going to drive me completely insane for want of another chapter! I\'m going to... do something terrible to you if you pull a cliff hanger like that again! Please update very, very, VERY soon!
(Btw, you wouldn\'t mind donating that extra manga 7 to a poor deprived soul, would you? *looks hopeful* Please?) :)
person Ica Black
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best FAKE fic I\'ve ever read. The emotion, the pain, the love is written so well that it is tangible. I can identify and understand and my heart actually lurches in my throat as I read this. Please continue, esp. with the fantastic sex scene.
person wildefyre
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW!! You just have to post the rest! *Gets on knees and begs* That was hot!!! I love Ryo taking charge! Then again I\'m a huge fan of Ryo/seme! This chapter was a tease but very well written. You have nothing to worry about as far as writing lemons go. You did a fantastic job on that bit you just posted. Of course I would have to be listening to the FAKE drama CD \"Final Act\" and the scene where Dee and Ryo finally get down to business. What a great thing to listen to! Dee and Ryo moaning while reading a hot lemon! Can you tell I liked this chapter? *Big Grin* Can you tell that I want more? PLEASE? Keep up the awesome work and write more Fake fanfiction kudasai?
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How beautiful! I\'m so happy for Dee and Ryo *sniff*. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
person Someone Out There
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just got to read your new chapter, and I loved it. Dee\'s still nervous about how he\'s behaved over the past weeks, but Ryo\'s more than ready to show he\'s forgiven. Thought the part of Ryo getting \'bopped\' in the head was funny. Now it\'s going to be Ryo\'s turn and I can\'t wait to see what Dee may have in mind for him! Can\'t wait \'til you update again...

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