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HELLO, HELLO!
It\'s been forever since I\'ve last kept in contact with you. It\'s your fault anyway, you decided to ignore me. So, how\'s it going? Me, living off bread and water for the past couple of months...hahahhahhahhaa anyways, this chapter was VERY interesting. Not only do my babies hook up again but they also get some steamy make-up pre-sex! And I\'m proud you didn\'t false advertise, if you know what I mean!*winks and nudges ya* eh, eh,? Else, I would\'ve really ran you over with the tractor trailer! It was hot....mucho caliente! Hahhahahahahha I enjoyed it...after aI amI am Captain Hentai...So, here are my last words for ya: \"BRING ON THE PORNO!\" *^0~*
Kit_Yang

That was pretty good. Don\'t think I can really analyze this one, though. Loved Ryo getting bopped, that image just made me laugh. Also nice to see Dee in \'sweet\' torture... Will be looking out for the next chapter or however you do this...

Yep, on line, get to be first on this one! I thought you did a great job and I look forward to reading either a revised longer chapter or another one. It doesn\'t matter. I don\'t know what else to say about this one, except that I\'ll be waiting to read more!

of course I\'ll hang on for the rest!!! Hopefully you\'ll update soon!! ^o^

Okay, I\'m going to try this again... And I will keep trying until AFF actually lets my review go through. I must be reviewing at a bad time or something because I haven\'t been able to review for the past few chaps. Anyway, I knew right from the beginning what it was that Ryo had been doing but you had me on the Armon thing. I\'m glad that Dee has come to his senses finally and that true love is prevailing. You have written an exceptional story here and I would be honored if I could host this on my website. If I can, I\'ll simply link to it for now so you don\'t have to worry about sending my the chapters. This story is one all FAKE fans NEED to read!! I\'ll be looking forward to the next (last?) chapter and praying that this review finally goes through!! JA!

YAAAAAAY im so happy for so many reasons ^_________^ u made my day cause i jus came from reading a deathfic, so sad but nuf about that im here to praise u. im sooo glad ryo ave ave that dummy ;p .i knew he couldnt give dee up over a (huge) misunderstanding. i also want to know bikky\'s reaction to dis X3 . n frankly im sorta happy dis isnt over cause its just that good that it would be sad when its over. oh n i gaurantee u that i will be back for that lemon ^_~ keep up the great work especially yaoi since u seem to be damn good at it.

~ *huggles n Fake bishies* Aka

This story is superb. I have really enjoyed reading it so far. I\'m glad you are posting the chapters so quickly. You keep writing and I\'ll keep reading. Dee & Ryo belong together.

I have to say that I am not disappointed with the chapter. I am glad that you actually stopped to think that this scene was needed. Most would just jump right into a lemony scene for the sake of the sex, but you\'ve allowed our characters to -- I don\'t know what the right word is I\'m wanting to use here, but it like you\'ve given them more character. Ryo is a thinker, and even though he\'s wanting to be with Dee, you\'ve got him needing time to make a choice. Gee it took him two years in the series, and there was kissing, and a bit of wanting, and a lot of thinking. Poor Dee, I could see him wandering around doing all that stuff, worried. I really liked that Dee, instead of thinking \'ok you take thame,ame, as long as I get to be back to jump you bones, it\'ne wne with me\' you gave him a pretty decent image to -- like you said -- accept responsibility of his own actions.

Anyway, instead of deducting every scene, I want to say again that I was wringing my hands reading this, nearly crying with Dee. However this chapter turned out it\'s still leading to that \'special\' time that I\'m looking forward too. Guess you had to give one last bit of angst in there, didn\'t you? With a story like this one, how could you not?

Hey, really enjoyed this chapter even though you didn\'t follow through with that lemon yet. Just when you thought it was going to end, you throw in a bit of a clinker there. Fits the story. I for one was not disappoinin iin it, either. One last worry, one last heartache, but now it\'s going to be a nice make-up scene... *on knees ing*ing*... you.... you couldn\'t... umm... turn something else around... would you... and give us all a heartattack, would you? PLEEEASE NOOO! They\'ve gotten to this part... let them kiss - really kiss - and make up! Oh, and I love the way you write and how you get us to really FEEL for both of the characters. You had me jumping for one to the next to feel sorry fwantwanting to blame the other, then switch-o. You really do a great job. Please continue writing....

Just when I\'d thought you\'d gone and your best work on the pervious chapter... You come around and pull yet another rabbit out of the hat with this chapter. I must say thaam tam throughly impressed and jealous about you amazing abilities as a writer. I absolutly LOVE your story. I only wish I had half the writing ability you do when it comes to emotions and suspense. I can\'t wait for the next chapter to be posted, and although I have a good idea about what\'s going to happen, I am still justed as eagar to read it as the last manga in the series. ( I STILL don\'t have it yet! *pouts* It\'s not fair.) Please post when ever you get the ce.
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-Analia