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for Warrior\'s Rest

by acexkeikai

person Chirella
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, that was a really good chapter! I especially liked these two sentences, which both made me laugh out loud;

Milo referring to Shaka\'s sex life: He probably go OM and touch hands or something. & Milo teasing Shaka about Ikki: What\'s the matter, Shaka? Pissed off because your little chicken got cold feet on you?

Little Chicken! LOL I will always think of the great Phoenix Ikki as a little chicken now! =)

I\'m so happy you updated! Look forward to more!!
person Chirella
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more! Ikki sick is tooo cute, but he's had it rough and Shaka is there to help him! =) Shun and Hyoga at a love hotel LOL, that will be exciting. YAY for Seiya and Shiryu...who is Milo going to hit on after all this?? Can't wait for next chapter!
person Selphius
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jumps out of her chair* Ha! I know the song Shun was listening to! \"Green, black and blue making colors in the shy.\" Am I right? *giggles hystaricly* Awesome fic! Love it love it. ^_^ Asid from the grammar errors it\'s wonderful, and I for some reason liek that fact the Milo is doing drugs... hm... Made me want to cry when he said he missed Camus... ;_;
person Silverr
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Entertaining. They all seem in character too.

There are a few spelling and punctuation errors (but they don\'t stop enjoyment of the fic). If you want me to proof and correct them let me know.
person Chirella
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! The characters are great and funny! What\'s up with Milo? =) What a goof!
I can\'t wait to see what hap wit with Shaka & Ikki and Seiya & Shiryu.
Keep Writing!! **And little matchmaker Shun is too adorable!**
person Animom
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah, so nice to see this here.

I enjoyed this story when I read and reviewed it on MediaMiner. So glad to see you\'re posting it here, hope that means new chapters~!

I especially like the way you\'re developing Shaka and Ikki, nice and slowly. it\'s not a pairing that I especially espouse but you come closer to convincing me than anyone else I\'ve read. (grins)

(And I do hope you keep the funny scene between Mu and Milo that starts the next chapter - it always makes me laugh.)

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