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September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the fic.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so beautyful!
Please write more of this!
Please write more of this!
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Go Gateu! I liked it itshows that there is a deeper emotion beneath the sex some of the fanfic I read is just pure smut. Anywho I hope you write more! Hugs and Kisses love to fuck.
~Kim~
~Kim~
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn you\'re good. ^_^ The world NEEDS more Gateau/Marron smut, and no one does it better then you.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...this was lovely. <3 I love how Gateau was so persistent yet sweet and not sadistic...XD
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Gah, it cut me off when I tried to do an ascii-heart. :P)
As I was saying, I love how Gateau was portrayed as being persistent, yet gentle. And Marron\'s reaction was very good, too...wanting it, but also wanting it gently and not all agressive-like. ^^
As I was saying, I love how Gateau was portrayed as being persistent, yet gentle. And Marron\'s reaction was very good, too...wanting it, but also wanting it gently and not all agressive-like. ^^
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was simply lovely. I enjoyed the imagery that was used; the idea of Gateau and Marron making love is always appealing but the thought of them together like this in a snowy setting makes it even more pleasant. I like Gateau\'s portrayal in this very much; it is nice to see him characterized with more tender, yet distinctly masculine aspects. You did an excellent job in displaying a subtle affection underlying the sexual relationship; subtlety is generally a good.
I only found two errors, minor nitpicky details. You misspelled \"deer\" as \"dearhen hen referring to the \"deer head\" on the wall. Also, you used \"uncontent\" later on which should be \"discontent\". Aside from that, I didn\'t see anything that needed to worked on.
Again, I love the imagery used in this and the thought of Marron being unnerved by a deer head on the wall is very amusing, perhaps because he\'s normally so calm. Those things *can* be rather scary. XD
I liked the mention of Marron getting cold easily but being too stubborn to admit and the bit about Gateau giving him an hour to come back in was very sweet. Again, I like the subtle affection underlying that. :)
Well done. ^_^
I only found two errors, minor nitpicky details. You misspelled \"deer\" as \"dearhen hen referring to the \"deer head\" on the wall. Also, you used \"uncontent\" later on which should be \"discontent\". Aside from that, I didn\'t see anything that needed to worked on.
Again, I love the imagery used in this and the thought of Marron being unnerved by a deer head on the wall is very amusing, perhaps because he\'s normally so calm. Those things *can* be rather scary. XD
I liked the mention of Marron getting cold easily but being too stubborn to admit and the bit about Gateau giving him an hour to come back in was very sweet. Again, I like the subtle affection underlying that. :)
Well done. ^_^