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for In The Zone

by mousemakingsushi

person LittleShiv
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo cute! But it needs a beta, badly (seriously, re-read the second one). Ok anyway..still good. Now do one with Saitou! He is so freaking hot.
person Gendos
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Whoa, what a tease that was! Kinky, having sex in a laundry where anyone can walk in! Mmmm.
It was sweet of Kenshin to make sure his girl had a good time...often not too many young guys do that or even think that far. So I (along with Kenshin I\'m sure) am waiting for the next chapter so Kaoru can return the favor with interest. *ohohohoho!*

::looks up:: Hey, isn\'t that \"Wistful eyes\" person asking for a Kenshin/Tomoe lemon that person on ff.net who reviews supporting/egging on the writers of Kaoru-bashing fics? All that *after* ag reg readers not to have a war on Tomoe vs Kaoru in his/her fic...geez. -_-+
person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha... LOVED IT!
person Kaoru-chan
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL I love your story .... I hope you continue .... and please don\'t make a Tomoe and Kenshin lemon.... Tomoe was just to cold inthe whole series of Samurai X .... and to make her loving and caring is a little to much .... because she was of how she really was.... she is wasy to cold to be that intement (sorry if I spelled some words wrong.... I suck at spelling ^^x)

anywho....n ifn if ya do make a K/T paring I would still read it... because I like the way you write your fanfics ^^



*** Do what you really want to do and have others follow, your own ideas***


*^*^*~*Kaoru-chan*~*^*^*
person Wistful-Eyes (too lazy to log in)
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So you take pairing suggestions? Would you do a KenshinXTomoe one, please! Let me know if you get it up, I\'ll be looking forward to it!
person Laurika
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good job! I liked it! Of course, I did notice a few typos here and there, and it did go a little fast, but who said that was against the law, right? ^.~ I want to see some more of this fic! Please continue!

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