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for Thirst

by Pandelerium

person Liz
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! Hot sex, good writing, and--finally--a glimpse of Touko. I\'d love to see a follow-up with Amon and Robin, but I think I\'d like to read anything you write from here on out. You\'ve got a very good style.
person Paranoid
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good. I mean really good. As in, keep writing. I felt what was going on both physically and emotionaly.
person tealeaf
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, I especially liked your portrayal of Amon and what\'s really going on behind his icy facade. I also really like how you wrote the girl (I can never remember her name >.<) especially her kind of bitter pride at the end. Very well done.
person tealeaf
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(I don\'t know if anyone else sees this but on my comp only half the reviewed showed so here\'s the rest).<) especially her kind of bitter pride at the end. Very well done.
person tealeaf
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it did it again! arg, good fic, love your writting, love Touko\'s bitter pride at the end. There, this should fit ^^()
person Flirtingw/fire
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally a story where Touko appears. Everybody seems to ignore her, but she\'s there notheless. I love your narrative skill. :)
person Gnome
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally, there is yet another light through the masses and masses of crap that exist on here.

Good work, I\'d like to see you write more.

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