rate_review Reviews

Well I saved the review for the last chapter, but WOW. While I would like to see more chapters on Ice...just...wow. You did such a FANTASTIC job of writing these WOW!!! Shun/Mu....sooooooo amazing. I never liked them as a couple but I've seen your writing before and figured that if ANYONE could make me see them together it would be you. And guess what? LOVED it. Mu is such a cool character but not enough people can write him well, and m'dear, you are FANTASTIC at it! Shun/Ikki.....Ikki kinda scared me a little bit, mostly because Shun is my favorite character I love him soooo so much and I didn't like seeing him in pain like that, but the chapter was still GREAT! I really don't enjoy Shun/Ikki fics that much but yours was great. For once, you didn't have to make Ikki's character bullshit and babyish like most authors/authoresses do to him when they pair them up! I really did enjoy it although I liked the others better ^.^ Personal favorite, Shun/Hyoga. Not only do I like that couple the most to BEGIN with, but even if I didn't, I loved how you wrote it out, a little humor which we ALL love, mixed in with a fantastic lemon, and especially the way you managed to (for once) make Hyoga inexperienced as well! No one EVER does that with him (not even me *sweatdrop* although I PREFER him that way *sweatdrop*) so HOORAY!!! The last chapter with "Jin" WOW never saw it coming and I loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much too! Wow! Shun actually the one urging his partner on? SOOOOOO rare and so NEEDED in fics! I like seeing him so sweet and innocent (since he's freaking 13!!!) but it's nice to see CHAAAAAANGE!!!

Random note, Hyoga is Russian/Japanese. Half and half. Not Siberian, he only trained there. Just one minor detail I figured I'd point out ^.^

LOVED this, telling all of my friends to read and rate and now......I am going to read it all again because it just kicked THAT much ass!!! Keep on writing, you have a GIFT!!! Oh, and LOVED the way the Shun/Mu chapter ended with the rose....I actually SAID "awwww!" out loud. So cute :D and Shun/Hyoga made me giggle :D

YOU ROCK!

OOOOkay...maybe ONE more review....this time addressed to readers....IF YOU SKIPPED THE IKKI CHAPTER because of the incest, read it any-freaking-ways trust me. You'll laugh at yourself later on if you find out WHY :P

ooh i love Mu ending!!! i\'m going to read the others now ^^

#1) My, Mu sure does have it bad for the innocent Saints, hm?? I still like Mu and Shiryu better, but you know what I\'d like to see? A threesome of Mu/Shiryu/Shun! That way, Mu gets all the innocence he wants!
#2) Not bad. I liked the position they were in. Their sex scene was the best, to me.
#3) Hyoga! Always glad to see my fav. pair.
#4) Whaaaa??? hehe Nice!

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THANX GIRL FOR WRITING IT FOR ME! I LUV U NOW! I am pleased u picked Black Dragon,Even through i don't think the named matched hi DON DON'T REALLY CARE RIGHT NOW!:) Plus i'm SOO happy u made their sex part more better than the others!THANX AGAIN FOR WRITING IT FOR ME!;) U R A BLOODY BRILLANT WRITER! I THINK U SHOULD GET AWARDS FRO YOUR FICS! U know like yaoi or yuri awards!

And yes Hiso Chan she did,Cauz it is pretty hard to write a fic bout Black Dragon! I requested it! Also Sliver i thought it was
Aphrodite's too when she said rose! I asked Chir to write me an alternate ending with either Black Dragon Or Aphrodite! And i'm SOO happy she picked Black!

Latest chapter seemed a bit corny and rushed. It wasn't bad, but not all that good. Did you have to work through writer's block on this?