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I know this is a pretty old story, and I'm not sure if you (the author) still log onto the site....But this is an absolutely beautiful story. I don't think I've ever been so ... moved, while reading a story. I almost cried when it ended. Everything was just so perfect. And poor Sanzo! It's so adorable that he can't admit his love for Gojyo. They make such a gorgeous couple, and you wrote them so in-character.

If you ever do log back onto this site, please write the sequel ^^

I really adore this story.

Aw man... Poor Goku. He's gonna be really upset. Though whether because Gojyo did it or did it FIRST, I'm not sure.
_melissa

Thanks for the warning on the sex chapters. My mom really would shit a solid gold brick.
This keeps getting more awesome! I'm on six at this point, so I haven't read all of it, but still.
I feel really bad for Sanzo, but you've got his reactions just... perfect. He's so freaking hard ot write under REGULAR circumstances, and with all the stuff that's happened to him here, I would think he owuld be near impossible, but you've reallly done an awesome job.
Back to reading!
_melissa

Heh. Found it.
NO, you didn't butcher Hakkai at all. In fact, I think you wrote them all really really well. Especially Goku. The way you write his POV sort of fucuses on teh food that's around without just being straight- out FOOD FOOD FOOD.
You're awesome.
_melissa

Good story. Im enjoying this very very much! ^_~

Chapter 12 is fucked up.

It\'s too hard to read like that. Fix it please?

wow! i really enjoyed this. such a long story as well as sanzo and goyjo pairing. i can\'t beleive how lucky i was to find it!

Wow. I\'ve only made it to part4 so far, but... wow. Intense.

This is an absolutely amazing fic!!!! I love the way you had the characters develop. Also, Sanzo and Gojyo are my favourite pairing.

A sequal would be very much enjoyable.

Yes! It took me FOREVER, but I finally finished reading it! And I must say, this was absolutely fabulous. *dances around you, tossing daisy blooms*

It\'s not often that I dedicate myself to reading such a long fic, but I\'m certainly glad that I did. From beginning to end I was struck with chills, tummy butterflies, painful laughter, and yes even some tears. The descriptions in this story were so utterly VIVID I was filled up to the line by pure awe and jealousy. I don\'t think I could duplicate, or even come close to comparing to your talent with this.

As for your character depictions, yet again, yay! I HAVE watched the series, btw, and I can totally see Sanzo as a cutter and a suicidal; especially after all that crap you put him through. *pets you* I can see why my dearest minion adores you so much. (That would be Flamingolo, btw... she\'s the one who rec\'d you!)

And yes, I even enjoyed the fluff; as fucked up and twisted as it was ^^. I think the ending did it for me the most, though... there was just something so sweet about them curling up together under the stars... *sighs, then smacks some sense into herself* gah! What\'s the world coming to!

Anyway, I just wanted to give you my two cents, and a little bit of worship. You so deserve it. You completely hooked me on this story, the series, and the Saiyuki fandom in general. *gives you a shiney medal* Ra.

I look forward to the sequel!! Hurry up and write!

Cool story! I\'ve only just started reading Saiyuki so i don\'t know all the ins and outs, but i couldn\'t stop reading your fic.