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*Deep Sigh* I always hate it when good stories come to an end as all good stories must at some point. I loved the way it ended even though I would love to \"see\" more of the love story unfold. I am sure there would be lots of pitfalls to come in their future. Poor Hakkai. *reaches over and gives Hakkai a big hug for emotional support*. You rounded this off nicely, and managed to still keep them all in character. This was a great fic and you did a bang up job on it. I have enjoyed every moment of reading it. (OK, there were a few moments where I didn\'t enjoy it due to \"really\" bad things happening, but you know what I mean!) and I hope you will do another sequel of sorts some time in the future. Thanks!!
*Sniffs, and then gives Animegher a Big Hug!*

Sniff... I think I will be missing it. And I hope that you will write again and again and again... You have wonderfull talent. Good luck!

the...WHAT?! you\'re ending it THERE?!??!?!?

>.< you\'d BETTER write a sequel dammit...I\'ve been checking back on this story too often for you to just end it here ;_; besides..what kind of ending is THAT? o.O

*pokes* c\'mon...you can do a sequel, yes? :D

~Angel

Holy shit.

Hooooleeeee sheeeeeit.

Hakkai is FUCKING SCARY. I need to go hide under my bed now.

(Jenna peeks out from behind her hands)

You know, I actually started having strange thoughts about our sweet, sexy, underappreciated Hakkai getting the ever-loving shit beat out of him by some freakin\' huge pack of youkai, and Sanzo and Gojyo having to take time off from their little emotional issues to feel pretty wretched about their own sorry little selves. I mean, damn, they\'ve been getting their freak on like bunnies, meanwhile leaving Hot-Motha-Freaka-Hakkai out in the cold? What a couple of morons!

Of course, my idea of Hakkai-torture also came complete with lots of hurt/comfort-themed sex. Lots of it. As in, gobs and gobs of it. I think the idea itself may just corner the lube market.

Wonderful as always. Your Hakkai is fabulously, delicately insane. I started drooling the instant he started throwing things at that weird-ass doctor. I mean, dude, I was surprised that Gojyo didn\'t just drag his pretty ass back into the room, throw him on top of Sanzo, and proceed to drill them both through the floorboards!

(delighted giggles)

Love you much! Good luck with that smut you promised!

@Jen@

Ah, my dear Animegher your portrayal is NEVER OOC!! You always seem to peg them to a T!! I really loved Goku in this chapter. He was perfect. He wouldn\'t be afraid to stand up to Sanzo. But it would bother him to see Sanzo acting the way he has whether there was a good reason or not. And Poor Hakkai. I wanted to just give him a hug I felt so bad for him. *Gives Hakkai a big HUG for emotional support!* And I even felt for Sanzo too. It is so hard for him to reach into his soul and touch those absurdly silly things called emotions. Much less act on them. You are doing a really great job with this story line and I always look forward to each new installment. Thanks so much for not giving up on this and letting it fall to the wayside. I must say I am way looking forward to the next \"smut filled\" part!! (no not rushing you of course, but if you don\'t have anything else to do..........:D)
*goes to get lots of chocolate and diet pepsi in anticipation!! Hands a large chocolate bar to Animegher for energy to write the next bit!!*

Hurray! You posted! Whew, this chapter conjured up all kinds of conflicting feelings for me; you had me really wanted to intervene and talk some sense into our boys. I know I\'ve mentioned this before, but you really do a smashing job with Hakkai. I don\'t think I\'ve ever read a fic that captures his emotions with such complexity, and I\'ve no doubt that he was a bitch to write for ^_^ But, you get a box of pocky *hands you a box*, you did a smashing job! I especially liked how torn he is between getting forced into his nice guy role, and actually being pissy every once in a while. You do a nice job writing all the characters, and I love the depth you\'ve taken with Goku, making him more than just the typical stuffing-face-and-Sanzo\'s-bitch character. And yay! He strapped on a pair and stood up to Sanzo! That was a surprise, but well-fitting considering their relationship, Goku is only looking out for Sanzo\'s best interest, yet allowed to get a little fed up every once and a while. I have to say that your take on Gojyo has made him my favorite character to read in this fic, because, again, you\'ve written him with more dimension than most. I\'ve said it before, and here it is again: I adore this ficcie to pieces, I can\'t get enough. And the promise of smutty goodness ahead *eagerly sits on edge of seat*...

You know that I love you right now, right?
Sanzo pounced, well okay, went down on Gojyo out of his own free will. *___* yeah…

Sooooo, little Hakkai has finally reached his limit and thrown a fit at a pathetic little midget – how manly! Hakkai is currently bathing in his own pity and although I don’t like him really (in that story), I admit that fate (Kanzeon) has dealt him a particular shitty hand in this game. But ain’t he the master player? Oh right, he is losing it, even against Goku – who is very cute and adorable in his not so childish ways. Amazing really.

He has turned out to be the adult indeed and the one who is seeing what is there and what is not. Gojyo and Sanzo *are* in love as well as Hakkai is in love with Sanzo and he knows he is special to Sanzo, too. Too bad he doesn’t know *how* very special. Sanzo loves clearly loves him and is more honest to himself about that.

What is so great about Hakkai’s point of view is that he is so blind in his selfish rage and he makes way too many assumptions where his friends are concerned. He obviously doesn’t understand Sanzo half as good as Gojyo does (who I think understands Sanzo far better than he himself guesses) and still insists in a way that Gojyo is using/abusing the priest. How fucking delusional can one man be?

Though very fine parallel between Kannan and Sanzo – I could see that and that it’s eating Hakkai alive.

Sanzo is so fucked up – almost asking Goku whether he thinks Gojyo is in love with him like a teen and then a minute later turns into denial. Can’t they just admit it.

I’m really wondering how you are going to clean this mess up. And soon, please.

Can you believe it, I only noticed the update today. *shakes head*

PS: Gave already up on LJ? ^_~

For one moment I thought that you got bored with this story and you just drop it! I\'m glad that wasn\'t true!! ^^
I loved the confrontation between Hakkai and the Kappa, I feel sorry for Hakkai, specially when people knew him as \"the drunk\".. how annoying.
And I must say that I love when Goku is the one that resolves a special situation, specially when it involves to confront Sanzo, soo I\'m very thankfull for that.
Is kinda cute to see our beloved bitchiness embarrased, hehe.
Soo please keep going and don\'t do other fics!! (just joking, I found your Weiss Kreuz fics interesting too)
Other thing... I found some draws made by you by accident in deviantart and you draw very well also!! O_O

*clings like an utter, fucking idiot* Yay! New chapter! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time-- and then there was no more to read! Nothing! WHAA!! I absolutely ADORE this fic (just o you know) And am looking forward to a new (SMUTTY!) addition!

I'm mising this Fic very very much!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease go on