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hakkai just seems to be jealous. oh so jealous. and Goku is well...Goku...<< and uh...horizontal bars are evil^^!

Simply Perfect!!!!!!!!

Wow. o___________o I don't want this to end. It's so good! I love teh Sanzo angst. And I'm so glad you're updating again! I remember starting it back in May, and then you paused it for a while. I was heartbroken ToT. This is my favourite fic. I tell everyone I can about it n_____n. It's just that good. Anyway, I LOVE the last chapter. I think it's my favorite. I love the way you characterize Sanzo and Gojyo and Wh00t! What a sex scene! I was practically giggling through the tickling part. I can just imagine Sanzo being ticklish. *sigh* Keep up the awesome work!

"nt snt some more", said in a very Claudia from Interview with the Vampire way... this is one of the best chapters I read!
What new can I say? You keep making better and better situations! The next thing could be Kougaiji's appearance in their worst situation ever! O_O You're so full of surprises!
Poor Sanzo! You know, he really needs to eat something NOW! it gave me the cs ses seing him not eating from..when? I don't even remember!! The guy's gonna disappear, if he keeps like this he'll gonna end eating baby stuff... Ewwww and embarrasing..
Talking about embarrasing: the scene with the two jerks and the monk helpless.
When trying to not hurt himself because Gojyo doesn't want him to... Soo cute! Finally the bastard priest is hearing the others!!
Hakkai: Poor guy, nobody is paying attention to him... is sad.. boo boo. He was royaly right when he suggested eating other thing, healtier...
Goku: Awwww so cute! the comparison with the blowjob and eatin was so good ^^
Gojyo: I love seing him being the one taking the upper hand! XD, I mean being the dominant in the couple, not wait!, the dominant in the group now... At last Sanzo is paying ationtion to him, in his way, AND aknownledge him finally!! Loved when he didn't want to let the redhead go at their room. Loved the sexual tension at the eating scene!! And the two youkais jealousy was excellent!
Interesting stuff with the ghost remaining problem I want to see the next fight!

Keep going PLEASE!! And thanks for the long chapter!! ^^

Awesome! I loved the tension and fighting between Hakkai & Gojyo over the monk. Of course, I want Gojyo to win cause that's the pairing I like (*grin*). And the erotic eating scene LOL. Yeh, those are always fun to write. Did one myself in an X-men Logan/Remy fic I wrote. Thanks for the link! Wow, so multi-talented you are. Wish I could draw something other than stick people, then I'd draw you something as a gift for writing this & the WK fic, and also as a bribe to update soon (*big smile*).

Okay, first things first! I love the chapter! *yay*

That said, here goes, you may want to look at the formatting, hard to read the way it is. I had to print it out.
Well, I do that anyway but, you know, yeah. There are a few sentences where you mixed up words so they look
weird and made me read it twice to get it, including one mix of the names. Maybe beta it one more time? In the *tsheheh* yummy sex scene,
suddenly Gojyo is behind Sanzo, although they do it missionary style at first, which is proven because Sanzo comes over Gojyo's belly a few sentences later.
Mh.
Okay, so much for that. NOW...

IT's love - hah! *happy dancing* ...okay, it's lust! *more happy dancing*... or maybe...
Hakkai - go to hell! “I don’t fucking want yours,” *YES, YES ... fucking YES!!!* ... I'm a little happy here.
Sanzo kissing back, taking of his own jeans and trying to not hurt himself because Gojyo doesn't want him to. *awwwwww*
Also, I was very happy that Sanzo was finally up again, okay, he overdid it with all the food but, hey, he is gettin better.
Food - he is eating out of Goku's hand - FUCK! I could *see* Hakkai and Gojyo drool all over the place... who wouldn't!!! XD
And than... “Idiot. Just go warm up the bed, you fucking youkai half-breed,”
*thud* ~_~ gaaahhh, choke... drool .... gasp
Oh, yeah, it's love... lust... whatever...

Very, very satisfying . Thank you! *tackles, hugs*
later
ryushin

Really GOOD Fic, the the best saiyuki fanficton that I 've ever read

Oh, what a lovely day it turned out to be today!! There at the top of my Aff.net/Saiyuki page were those 3 little words that I love to read there........Never No Ans As alw always, my dear.......a Wonderful Chapter. I am still not sure how you do it, but each one is just as good as, if not better than the last. You have all the characters down to a Science. I loved that bit with Goku wondering about the blowjob. Priceless. And the scene at the table with all the meanings behind everything was great. And Gojyo's jealousy is just so darned adorable. Poor Hakkai. I do feel for him a bit. He's so miserable. The sex scene between Sanzo and Gojyo was very nicely done. Not over the top, not too mushy/fluffy and very Hot!! Your writing just flows. I love that. I wish I could do that, but you know what they say.....want in one hand........etc, etc. I do feel for Poor Sanzo. Today he is throwing up?? Poor guy never seems to get a break. Just tell me at some point he will be the seme and Gojyo the uke and I will be happy. I am waiting for that one!! Anxiously! Which leads me to my last point. I just KNOW you are not going to LEAVE us with Sanzo telling Gojyo to go warm up the bed.
EVIL!! Just plain Evil. Of course you could make it up to us by posting another chapter real soon..........say tomorrow!!
(Just kidding. Take your time.......just not too long. The suspense is killing me and you wouldn't want to be responsible for me dying now would you??) *Wonders if she died would Sanzo chant a Sutra for her. In the mood he's in, probably not!*

Owwie!! *rubs eyes* I tried but I just can't read this last chapter. The formatting is all screwed up; it's like three times the width of the computer screen. You have to scroll waaaaaayyyyyyy over and then waaaaaayyyyyyy back to read it. *sniffles* I have a headache. Any chance of fixing it or emailing me a readable copy? I'm dying to know what happens.

Finally, I get to sit down and read this chapter. Thank goodness!. You never disappoint your readers. This just keeps getting better and better. I love the “for medicinal purposes only” blowjob. That was just grand!

Your characterizations are wonderful! Again, your style just flows delightfully and your thought it clear. Excellent.

Why is it that Gojyo , wonderful irresponsible Gojyo, so often becomes the “adult” in the situations? We don’t know, but we love it. And he so easily flips back to reckless adolescence. Man! Gotta love that.

I think you captured the man within Goku very well. It is so easy to portray him as veoungoung. He too swings the pendulum arch between childish and mature. You carry him through that arch superbly.

Hakkai detached and yet very much in the moment. You tagged that one right on top of the head. I’ve not really thought about that aspect of his personality, but you are right…he compartmentalizes like no one’s business. It’s almost as if he was modeled after someone rooted in Western culture -- aren’t we thankful that’s where the parallelism ends.

Goku…knowing and yet not knowing. A seemingly paradoxical dichotomy. You bring that out. Excellent work!

If wish you safe travels on your vacation. Rest, relax and enjoy. We’ll be here when you get back desperate for a new chapter.

Sorry, it took me so long to read and review. I wanted to get R&HO deep in the editing process before I read your work. Your work sticks to me and I didn’t want to accidentally steal anything. Please believe me, it took gobs and gobs of self control to resist your calling.

Thank you so very much for updating.

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