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Endlich! I like Sanzo/Hakkai and I think that now he will be the best partner for Sanzo. Besides - please no Sanzo/Goku! That is sick!

You have a delicious mind when it comes to creating a story. Both this and your Weiss fics are so full of angst and trauma, but also happiness and let's not forget the fantastic sex between my favorite pairings in both fandoms (*drool*). Always excited to see an update of your fics in either fandom. BTW, I was looking at some artwork links from the gojyoxsanzo, sanzoxgojyo yahoo group and found one that was really good and said that your fic inspired it. Don't know if you knew that or saw it but if you want to check it out then http://www.deviantart.com/view/3871480/

Ho My!!! That last chapter was a interesting turn of events!! I never tought that you'll put Hakkai in that erm... predicament, I enjoyed it terribly. And Goku ASKING Gojyo about THAT, that was one of the best scenes! HEhehe, Bad Hakkai, one can think all his previous fussing was just for jealousnes XD.... And talking about jealous guys, I loved Gojyo attitude!! So please keep GOING and I don't mind at all reading more that 20 pages, in fact I prefer long chpaters..SO GO FOR IT!!

Ho-leeeeee fuuuuuck....

I've been binge-reading your material. I love it all. I pant for more.

I literally bawled my eyes out through the chapters detailing poor San-chan's rape. I've been bawling over the guys' concern.

The Sanzo/Gojyo was touching and hot, hot, HOT!

More, please! (holds out plate for a double helping)

@Jen@

What an absolutely wonderful surprise to check for new fics and see an update to one of my favorites!! I know I have told you this before, but I need to reiterate it. I LOVE YOU!! God, this was so good. I blushed, I screeched, I laughed and I sighed!! I don't know how you manage to get into all their characters so well. It is amazing. And I thank you and all the Heavens above that each of your chapters are so nice and long. I just tingle with anticipation each time I see those 3 little words "Never No Answer" at the top of the fiction page. You can write as much as your want, and I'll never complain. That little bit with Goku stroking himself in the garden and being caught by the acolytes was priceless. And poor Hakkai. Wanting it so badly. (I am so glad he kissed him after!! He deserved it!!) And Poor Gojyo. So jealous!! Please, Please, I am begging you.......I need the next chapter soon!! I am DYING to know what's going to happen next.

No, no desire to kill a certain FanFic author.........just a sudden strong craving to track them down and force them to keep on writing!!

I want to kill Hakkai, too. that green-eyed hypocrite! *grrrr* I think it's safe to say from now on the group dynamic is fucked sideways.
At least Sanzo moaned Gojyo's name. I so hope it's going to work out for Gojyo and Sanzo. Would I ask too much if I want Sanzo to come
to Gojyo and start things? *yeah yeah, I'm hung-up on that idea!* Naah, too OOC...I know *sigh* Still I'm itching to find out what is going to happen
between Sanzo, Hakkai, Gojyo. I really don't like Hakkai waltzing into the picture but I have to admit it keeps me on my toes and excited to read more.
Still stand by 5x3 action - exclusively, though!!

Goku asking Gojyo what he meant by "sucking him off" made me fall out of the chair. *fucking great*
I think Gojyo and Goku are very much in character all over the story, I like that very much.
But, can't Sanzo be conscious and not drugged in any way for at least one chapter, pretty please? No offense but the effect is staring to wear off
and reduces him a little too much to a wimp, IMO.
Whatever, I'm pretty excited hhe she story is going to proceed with the haunting and the mixed up emotions due to getting into Sanzo's pants.

Very good!
... as expected *wink

read you
ryushin

Oh. My. God. Hakkai?!? Whhe fhe fuck are you doing?!? That's Gojyos monk, GOJYOS!!!! Aahhhhhh (runs around house pulling out hair) and how long do we have to wait for the next insanely long (thank you for being a prolific writer) chapter? *sniffs* I want to read it now. It's so unfaiiir. (falls to ground weeping)

I hope you\'re happy with yourself. I was late to work this morning because I just had to read the latest chapter... damn you! My poor abused bishies! I mean, first the utterly horrific thing Sanzo went through *shudders*, then trying to recover from it, dealing with a sudden appearence of (gasp) emotions!, having a spirit induced seizure, and now poor Gojyo has to deal with all this bullshit from his \"best friend\" who really ought to think better of him, and a traumitized monkey. Gah! My brain hurts!....write more soon? *makes big puppy eyes* I\'m rooting for Gojyo and Sanzo to make this thing work.

First let me wipe the egg from my face -- for assuming an ending. You have kept up theat wat work and characterization. Hakkai seemed to teeter on OOC, but you snagged him back in -- with grace. Hakkai getting drunk was something to get over, hey hey who is to say something is impossible for her/him/it. “Nothing’s impossible for me” (and that includes getting Hakkai wasted). Giggle

I really enjoy how the passive voice melds with the character in question. You do that quite well. I also enjoy your conversational style. Many times I find myself gasping at the screen and/ or giggling out loud. I like how you keep the reader in suspense -- not quite fully explaining things until you are ready , which at times might be a little longer than the reader wants. Good job.

I didn’t know we could respond to reviews either. I had assumed there was some unwritten fanfic rule about it too. Do you mind if I snatch your idea? I’ve tried responding to reviews via e-mail, but I don’t think my e-mails got there.

Again, thank you for taking the time to write this. Thank you for the entertainment.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

YESSSSSS!!! *hugs you

An update - the epic continues!!!
Gojyo WAS an ass that morning - curse his mother\'s womb. But he was in character, anything else would have been wrong.
I loved that part:
He twisted around on the bed, quite ready to speak his mind now…as Gojyo shrugged his head into shirshirt, pulling it back on in a flex of stomach muscles that demanded Sanzo’s complete attention.
I wouldn\'t be surprised - but wildly amused - if Sanzo would ambush and jump Gojyo any time soon. * he wn\'tn\'t, but I like the idea!!!

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Excuse me, I have a nice mental image and a ficlet to write now.
Thanks for being not only a fantastic writer but a good muse as well. *pecks your hand

ja
ryûshin

PS: Hakkai smashed - that\'s a new one and damn hilarious.