rate_review Reviews

This is an absolutely awesome fiction. You have captured each of the characters perfectly. At times the stark realism of this story is difficult to read and like a car accident you pass on the road, you don\'t want to look, but you just can\'t seem to help yourself. Each chapter is like a book in itself. Not sure how you find the time to write all of this, but please keep it up. I can hardly wait for each installment.

i really admired your fiction really love it please posted it as fast as posibble coz i can\'t hardly wait to know more. but you really have a good imagination. keep up the good work.

from now on i am your fans!

ganbate ne!

I think you wrote Hakkai very well. I personally think his inner thoughts are much darker than what he lets on. I think that might be why he’s always so nice. He’s over compensating for his darker thoughts. Given the circumstances of your story, his outward appearance would have darkened, so, I think you were right on point.

Hakkai can be difficult to write, he seems to have no conflict from which to work. However, we all know that to not be the case. If you aren’t using Kanan to get a reaction out of him, then you his his other weakness….his comrades….his band of brothers. He walks a fragile line and he knows it -- in my mind-- he sees himself as one slip up away from “that time”.

Excellent and keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of this story.

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

Hey!

I have to go, but I\'ll come back and finish... anyway, lovely job, LOVE the detail!!! There\'s this one Saiyuki quote that just absolutely reminds me of this fic... it\'s from Kanzeon Bosatsu: \"They\'d rather bite they\'re toungues and die than answer to anyone else.\" I hope you like it/remember it! :)

Good lord keep going! This is turning out to be excellent. Give yourself a big pat on the back. I think you have characterized Gojyo to a T. I really like how you sprinkled in some humor with the angst and took us through his wavering thought process. Excellent!!!!

Cupnjava c[~]~~~ *sip*

Bravo! Very good, I could see the scenes playing out in my mind’s eye as I read. You almost made me late for work as I did not want to turn from the screen to get ready. You seem to have a better grip on Sanzo than I do. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading future installments.

Holy Shit, no one has reviewed this yet!?! DUMB-ASSES, THE LOT OF YOU! *huffs* this fis is awsome, its so deep and full of emotion, It really gets the point across and yet at the same time, tortures the reader with wanting to know what\'s going to happen next. Please, continue, I\'d hate to see this one discontinued because of a lack of reviews.