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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More please!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please hurry to finish this, it is great.
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the flashback..love the way you write Sanzo and Hakkai. Chapter Six before Xmas, maybe(hint,hint)
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope someone gets a good spanking out of all this ruckus.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I hope you continue it!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hail from the Saiyuki Yaoi ML. I figured I\'d give your fic a try, and I find it well done. I don\'t see anything wrong with your grammer at all. Though you punctuation could use a bit of work, you tend to over punctuate. Very easily remedied, just read your story back out loud. Punctuations when read will cause you to stop and pause or take a breath; if there are too many pauses, or too few pauses, then eliminate a comma or add one where neccessary. That was a bit of advise from one of my english teachers that I\'ve found works for me, especially since I don\'t have a beta. >_< Well anyway, looking forward to reading more.
-MystWynd
-MystWynd
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, how great a story this is. I love that you have Hakkai doing this, it\'s so funny, and sad. I like the demon attack and them all going to sleep. Please post more soon, I am very curious as to where this will end up.
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tal and Thorn, I think you need to keep posting this, and I will keep reading it. I don\'t understand what others were complaining about, I think the writting is very good, although I will admit I am slightly confused as to what is going on, but I figure if this is over 20 chappies, I will figure it out. Is this strictly a Sanzo/Hakkai pairing? I will admit, everyone has their favorites and this isn\'t mine, however I find the story interesting enough that I will continue to read. If you ever do a Goku/Sanzo I\'ll be sure to read too! Anyway, I would like to see more of this, so please continue!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
rock on! I know this from FF. If it\'s here now we must be in store for some hot Yaoi action. Do i hear Sanzo/Goyjo maybe?
I\'ve read ahead I know Sanzo is already struggling with both feelings for Goku ankkaikkai. What about the water sprite?
I\'ve read ahead I know Sanzo is already struggling with both feelings for Goku ankkaikkai. What about the water sprite?
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March 4, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I thought I\'d visit after hearing a little about the story from the saiyuki yaoi list.
I don\'t normally read Hakkai/Sanzou preferring Gojyo to be in the mix somewhere, whether with Hakkai or Sanzou doesn\'t really matter. ^_^
However, your story flows very well. I enjoyed the overall tone, the setting and the hints of Hakkai\'s and Sanzou\'s prior meeting.
Cheyenne
I thought I\'d visit after hearing a little about the story from the saiyuki yaoi list.
I don\'t normally read Hakkai/Sanzou preferring Gojyo to be in the mix somewhere, whether with Hakkai or Sanzou doesn\'t really matter. ^_^
However, your story flows very well. I enjoyed the overall tone, the setting and the hints of Hakkai\'s and Sanzou\'s prior meeting.
Cheyenne