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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that it appears to have been a while since you finished this, but...just wanted to give you compliments. I loved it. Then again, I\'m a big Motoko fan, so that much was to be expected.
At the end you mentioned that you might possibly write a sequel. I\'m not sure if you still planned on that, but...I do know that I\'d like to see and read it. I\'m kind of interested as to what you think would happen next.
At the end you mentioned that you might possibly write a sequel. I\'m not sure if you still planned on that, but...I do know that I\'d like to see and read it. I\'m kind of interested as to what you think would happen next.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...it was...good...too good....congratz on this great piece of work
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, lots of raw emotion throuout which is good, because it draws you into the story more, and makes it more interesting
Exelently done * gives a millin aplauds *
Exelently done * gives a millin aplauds *
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story love it!
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September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to commend you on a job very well done. Looking forward to the sequel, espeiy hoy hoping for Naru to get her life back together.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must bow to the master! Your story is great! I think you dictate really well and I like how you keep everyone within character even while all these events make it so easy to do otherwise. I haven\'t finished it yet, but I\'m sure I\'ll like it.
meommix
meommix
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I always wondered what it would be like if keitaro fell for Motoko. But, in the manga, Motoko does fall for him. He doesn\'t feel the same for her and tells her that he loves Naru. This is a very interesting alternate reality fanfic. I somehow know he will pick Naru before I read the final chapter. Either that, or I hope wholeheartedly that he picks Naru. It just seems like destiny.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey man i just got done with your story and all i can say is .. wow its the best love hina fic i have read and with any of your future works or what ever the case is i would love to read them. your a truly good author and your stories are well worth the wait to read.. keep on writing man .
Long Live Motoko & Keitaro - Ken -
Long Live Motoko & Keitaro - Ken -
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story and I think that you got the pairing of Motoko and Keitaro just perfectly, I always thought that Motoko would be better for him than Naru would be. I hope that you do write a sequal \'cause I will gladly read it.
From,
Tammy Miller
From,
Tammy Miller
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KICKASS!!!! Please continue! oh wait! There\'s more chapters! hahahahahahaha I\'m gonna go read them right now. BUT! If you haven\'t compleeted the story by now please do so!!!!!!!