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for Loss and Redemption

by hawker748

person Doss
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story,this is really good but add a lemon please.......FOR ALL OF GOD\'S MECIES WRITE A LEMON I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(SORRY FOR FRAKIN YOU OUT THIER...)
person Ragnarok
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!, nice to see the first love Hina Fanfic on AFF.net is so good.

Even though I like Kei/Mo pairings, i don\'t like it when Naru is getting hurt so bad. Quiet honestly, i don\'t know if you\'re gonna make this story a Kei/Mo or a Kei/Naru, but right now i wish it was a Kei/Naru, I think she\'s the one that deserves Keitaro the most kus she was the first one to accept him in the Hinata inn when everyone realized he wasn\'t a Tokyo U student. Anyway, if you\'re gonna make this a Kei/Mo fic please don\'t make Naru suffer so much
person Nida
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Read the whole thing in one shot. Wrenched my gut. I WANT MORE. GO MO-CHAN!!111

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