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by twishinky

person Excellent
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Please continue!!
person dacrayzblaze1
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was by fhe bhe best chapter, with much better language. your writing grows and i commend you for it and your story
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, actually I read chapter 8 a few days ago, but couldn't make a decent review. So I'm doing it now. This chapter was just GREAT. I loved to see Aoshi lonely and drunk, and this anger towards Kenshin was positively hilarious! (by the way, Kenshin's anger on chapter 6 was very good too).
I'd love to be a good reviewer and also talk about the bad points in your story, but the truth is that I couldn't find any. The sex scenes are amazing, the humor is great and now ths mos more romance! What else can I ask for?
I'm curious to know what's gonna happen next. Who's that guy asking for Misao's hand? Soujirou?
I'll wait anxiously for the next chapters, and meanwhile, see you on shinobi love!
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twisha, Twisha... superbly satisfying. You write the best lemons, girly. What I want to know, is who is this well dressed jerk waiting to talk to Okina about Marrying Misao? No no no no no no no! That is way to big of a kink in the pipe work.
I love this story, sweet friend. I'm so glad you're writing again. I didn't know you were over on MM.org. I'll go looking for you over there. Love you, you wonderful woman. Don't ever stop writing.

Tsuki-san
person LinkinParkBabeoX
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story. It was great. I sat reading all the chapters in lyk 20 minutes. It was awesome
person the last samurai
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude u rock. i was waiting for when this would be updated and i must say this was sooooooooo worth thit. it. angst in the beginning though, but i loved the sex. Must say this is a gooooooood story

bless
person Kyte
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated the fic! I would check everyday on both AFF and Med for updates. This chapter was great ^-^ How much I love Aoshi/Misao more now. I'm trying to picture what is next to come, but you know I rather have the author tell the storyline. Don't care when you put up the next chapter, but hope I won't die before you do ;)
person Zerianyu
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey

ACKKKKKKKKKKKKK TWO CLIFF HANGERS TODAY WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLease post soon I love the fic. sniffles so good. LOl hope you post soon.
person Shadiyaray
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like. I can't wait for the next chappie!!
person dacrayzblaze1
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn! aoshi and misao are horny lil bastards! lol.... i love this story its great

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