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by twishinky

person dacrayzblaze1
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
u needa update this business soon!!!!! its freaking great!!!!
person ERICA
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow really detail and good cant really wait for more
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hysterical! Kaoru the Kamikazi driver! I can see it all now... and the part about making her Aoshi\'s cousin? Fabulous. Good chappy, Twish, my lovely. And I know what you mean about trying to get into Aff.net. It took me a month almost to get in to update my Vamp story. Finally did it just a couple of days before you did this. It\'s like pulling teeth out of a dead dogs head... damn hard.
Keep up the good work, Baby. You\'re on a roll.
God Bless, dear Friend.
Tsuki-san
person pola
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is simply the best lemon I have ever read, and apart from that the story is great, matvalous, amaizing etc.etc,etc, I hoper you update soon, because I can stop thinking of what is going to happend and trust me is driven me mad, well congratulation
see ya
atte
ana paola
person Zerianyu
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT WAS AMEAN ENDING. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY CHAP 777777777777777777777!




person Zerianyu
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT WAS AMEAN ENDING. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY CHAP 777777777777777777777!




person anime
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can\'t wait for more updates. The last update was great but one quick question-- what advice did the pregnant lady give Misao? I missed it. sorry...

I love your story. Your writing is great please keep writing. I am anxious to know how Aoshi will handle things. I certainly hope that Misao is strong. I hate it when she loses her pride too soon in Fanfics.

Keep up the good work!
person the last samurai
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude i have to say This was sooooooooooo worth the wait. i lauged so hard i loved Kaoru\'s psycho pregnant lady behavior. ooooooo the Icy bitches comment was mad funny. I especialy cracked up for \" you’re in deep shit, ...etc\" all in all mad props for this chapter, *eagerly awaiting next one*
person Sephiress
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY another chapter of Internal Affairs! I have been waiting for this and I love this chapter with Kaoru. I realyy like how Misao is trying to be strong since that i fit fitting to her character not to show emotions. I am happy to see her and Kaoru have become friends, while Aoshi and Kenshin seem friends as well.

I can\'t wait to see the stuff that goes on between Himura and Aoshi-sama next time. And what\'s the future look like for Aoshi and Misao? I\'ll just have to glue myself to the somputer until the next chappie!

much luv
Sephiress
person The Last Smaurai
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i woulda reviewed sooner but this site is real screwed up and it only let me in till now. Great chapter dude i actually made popcorn to read this chapter. I was thinking along the lines of where the story would go and what dark cloud u were talking about. to tell u the honest truth i thought she was pregnant but N e how i cant wait for the next chapteeep eep writing,

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