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by twishinky

person yue
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh and the plot thickens. oohh im still so in love with this fic. updaet soon. oh yeah wasnt kens's w's wife there too. what the hell are they doin up there and whats the wife doin when this went down. got to clear it up.
person Kyte
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* I wish FF.N would let you post this up. I would add this to my favourite\'s story list in a split second. I love your fiction so far. Keep the sex going even if the drama is builting. Nothing like frustration to fuck each other. Hope to read another chapter as soon as possible!
person Kanzen ne Tsuki
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You stopped it... THERE???
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! You wicked, wicked woman... I can\'t believe you did... THAT!!! Mwwwahhhahhaa!! T.T That was a... horrible cliffy... (You\'ve been reading my stuff too long... you\'re learning bad habits... LOLOLOL) Ahh, Excet cht chapter, Trish... just Excellent... bloody brilliant actually. Kenshin being such hard nosed businessman prude? I loved it... I laughed my ass off and choked on my coffee. It was GREAT! Hell, I was afraid she was getting ready to tell Aoshi she was pregnant... but this is much better... oh the wicked webs we weave... hehehehhehehehehe... Brilliant... ewwwww, btw. I updated \'Bad Kid\' and \'Do you want to live forever\'. ~o^.
Much love, Trisha girl.
Hope to see you again soon... take it easy... love this story and you.
take care my dearest friend.
Tsuki-san
person duke of spades
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes i\'m of age....somewhat anywho i\'m a rather poor writer ...i\'m working on it as best as i can yeah know college and stuff anywho i have waited very long and thats all i get please do a follow up quickly i\'m very anxious to see what happens next!! ^_^
person Arashi
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is an absolutely GREAT story! I\'m dying to know what happens next. You know, it\'s hard to find an adult story with a plot, and yours is making me more interested every chapter. Congratulations for the great job!
person duke of spades
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey love ya story hey when ya going to update....i wanna know what bad happens....misao says i love you......pregnent.....another woman or man what what what is it!!!!!!!!!!! i gotta know!

ALSO I\"M dainty and petite with long flowing locks who has grace, beauty and rare charm....... actually most of theses things i don\'t got but i wish i had..........(i just wanna to tell ya this because your author note was funny) ^_^ ok byebye
person Digital Siren
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'m glad I could be of help to you in your smut journey! It\'s getting better and better... I wonder if Misao\'s sore from that much fucking?

And GREAT cliffhanger. I\'m almost resentful towards you for it!
person yue
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dang its geting hot in here!! my god are the fucking like rabbits. dang. i hope u get to the plot line though. this is a great story all together so far but really needs a plot. update soon.
person Crickit
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! THAT WAS SOOO HOTT!! lord help..I wish most guys were like Aoshi..but I have my own dilemma that sorta parallels with your story...friends with benefits..but both great in sack..but!! both are falling for eachother, but won\'t admit it!! it tis sad..keep up with the story..I am loving every bit of it!!
person yue
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh dang is misao ever kinky-er. lol. that was a great chapter. update!!

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