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OMG.... that was such a grest first chapter ^^ you must and I mean must come out w/ the second chapter soon. I wonder what will happen since it was a dream.... demo how did the marks get on hisd chest though *wink* ... anywho I can\'t wait until the next chapter comes out so I a gawk over it LOL ^^x sooooooooooo please let there be another one out soon before I die form waiting ^^X


*&*^*&*~Kaoru-chan~*&*^*&*



*** Always try and do your best, because you never know who might be reading your stories***


Kenshin: oro why am IM always the one to get beat up by Kaoru-dono?

Kaoru: Mou! Becasue I\'m the one who pays the bills and brings home the food fo you freeloaders!

Kenshin: *sigh* Hai

Very hot and very well written. Can\'t wait for the mystery to unravel.

Hey

Interesting, good start. Post more soon please.