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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers....grrr to them. I shall have to banish them all one day, but then...what would keep up the anticipation? ^_^ Please write more as soon as possible. I can\'t wait for this to happen. Sorry that I sound perverted,but...I just want to see them come together afte all this! No pun intended..¬¬
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting to see how you pull this off.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Throws snowball at Paranoid* lol
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, won\'t flame you for the cliffy as long as you update soon. Seriously please update soon your killing me here. If you don\'t I definently will join the rock throwing.
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O *dies*
How could you leave it there?! *le sigh* so close T-T
Anyways, great story, I just started reading it yesterday and I love it! And now I\'m especially excited for the next chapter, so I hope you update soon! ^_^
How could you leave it there?! *le sigh* so close T-T
Anyways, great story, I just started reading it yesterday and I love it! And now I\'m especially excited for the next chapter, so I hope you update soon! ^_^
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the last chapter and I\'m so glad that they\'re coming out so fast. I really hate to have to wait two to three weeks for an update on fanfics but at the same time d had hate to diminish quality for speediness. Your quality is very high even with your speediness and I\'m so glad that Amon is finally taking baby steps towards Robin. You\'re right, they do need a swift kick in the ass!!!!!!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yah want reviews? I\'ll give ya reviews!
The shower scene was good. It caught his feelings of frustration and tension. Nicely done.
The description of Robin waiting paiteinly for Amon to come home read like a neglected wife, waiting at home for the man who vowed to love her, only to leave her to dry up and wither away.
Amon\'s physicall frustration being taken out on some unsuspecting woman, rather roughly. Yeah, I could see this too.
I do not think you give yourself enough credit.
The shower scene was good. It caught his feelings of frustration and tension. Nicely done.
The description of Robin waiting paiteinly for Amon to come home read like a neglected wife, waiting at home for the man who vowed to love her, only to leave her to dry up and wither away.
Amon\'s physicall frustration being taken out on some unsuspecting woman, rather roughly. Yeah, I could see this too.
I do not think you give yourself enough credit.
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Ya posted this over there too. I was quite suprised at the detail.
But I would like more of this from either here or over there. Just please continue. I realize being at this point in the story is never easy, some would call it the hump (take your mind out of the gutter), the difficult part to get over. I enjoy reading this as you seem to truly stay IC while giving these complex characters even more depth.
But I would like more of this from either here or over there. Just please continue. I realize being at this point in the story is never easy, some would call it the hump (take your mind out of the gutter), the difficult part to get over. I enjoy reading this as you seem to truly stay IC while giving these complex characters even more depth.
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello! =).. wow i really like your story, and i have to tell you first. im so sorry, i read your stroy through before reviewing it. i mean. i have to tell you the truth YOUR STORY F*^%ING ROCKS!!!!!!!! no realy it does.. but i can\'t stand it.. are they.. going to be together??.. i mean.. omg they both are felling the same way.. ahhhhh .
i love youir story.. thanks so much for sharing!!!=)
i love youir story.. thanks so much for sharing!!!=)
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! Keep up the good writing!