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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

great story.......... it was enthralling. god job, go ahead, pat yourself on the back..... (pauses to give time for a back patting) but their is only one problem..... *starts to sweat* while your story was really good * Breathing becomes labored* and really entertaining *dark enregy begins to form in proximity* you did the one thing that gets to me.....*Horns spout and wings burst forth* YOU USED A CLIFF HANGER..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY!?!?!?!?!.. its not right, in fact, its down right mean. hurry up and get the new story done with, before i lose control. i will look forward to reading it. Now if you dont mind *eyes glow red* i have a little sayain problem i have to deal with. * grins psychoticly* HEY!?!?!?!?!?! WHO SAID I WAS DONE WITH YOU GOKU!!!!!!!! GET BACK HERE. RUNNING WONT SAVE YOU OR THIS PLANET *LETS LOOSE A DEMONIC ROAR*

ITS TIME TO BRING ON THE PAIN LITTLE MONKEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(i`ll deal with the alchamist and the scouts right ofter i`m done with vash. bebop has already fallen. i will bring the greatest of heros to their knees!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

ok i like your fic nd i like where this is goign a prophecy cool so their kids have soing ing to do with it right never mind i will read it lol
update/write your new fic

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

That was amazing, and to be honest, I don\'t think you can continue it. I think it\'s perfect as it is, but that\'s just me. Great job!

I\'m sorry for the delay guys....I\'ve really had a hard time getting the motivation to write anything. But I have decided that since there seems to be some interest in this story and a wish for me to continue it I will, however I won\'t be continuing from where I left off on this one.....I will post as soon as I get outta this debilitating writers funk.

Awww,g. Sg. Sigh. Mushy, gushy high.

Awwww! sweet \'n fluffy.

\"The energy surrounding them was magic.\" Wow. I have to say I think this is my favorite chapter yet.