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for When All Is Said And Done

by iJ3i

person bob
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol no, no stones and i don\'t see amon as a typical guy either, i luved ur story i read it all at once i couldn\'t stop reading it, i\'d like to read more stuff by you cuz i luved this story write more.... i\'ll check ur profile when its not so late and idon\'t have a graduation to go to, oh and by the way i luved ur style its kinda hard to catch the atmosphere in WHR but you got pretty close and no one was disgustingly out of charater once again i luved it and i luv your sense of humor....write more!!!!!!!!
person Ravensky
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I have to say I like this story very much and I\'m so happy to finally see a Amon & Michael pairing. I find it hard to find that pairing but past that point. I love your story but from what I can tell there won\'t be anymore chapters since it\'s been a year or more since you last posted a chapter
person Miki
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finish the story, stupid.
person violet
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I was wondering.....did you destroy the straight version of this fanfic?
person auronslover
schedule September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww short chap but very happy for a update very exciting chapter can't wait for next please update soon very good fic
person anonymous
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story! I am soooo looking forward to future chapters. ^__^ And I must say that this story, so far, has the best lemon that I have ever read. I'm serious. :)

Keep up the great work.

anonymous
person auronslover
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh i must say i really love chapter eleven so exciting will robin live? oh please update soon i cant wait thankies
person Chibi-chan
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol, section eleven has gone to heaven? Hahaha, that's even cornier. :P

AMAZING job these two chapters. Ohh, poor Michael in chapter 10, I was like "Oh god," the implications that might have been going into his mind, especially just after he and Amon just...you know, lol.

This chapter and the next have gotten me on the edge of my seat -- now the energy and all hell is breaking lose -- what did Zaizen have planned, to get Amon and Robin killed...*sigh* I hope that doesn't happen. Maybe get injured, but not killed! I hope. It would be definitely crushing for either one of them to die.

I wonder what's going to happen...I hope they can get to Robin in time before they kill her. And to stop Zaizen. It seems Amon's efforts were just a little too late in stopping Touko at least.

I can't wait for more to read, you've definitely captured my attention fully. Do you know how many more chapters you'll be doing? I hope quite a few more. ^^;
person Chibi-chan
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update!

Wonderful chapter, I can't help but grin and hide my smile when Michael is feeling the...after effects of what he and Amon did.

It was so sweet what Amon did, pairing everyone up and out so he can give Michael a little food (lol, best way to get to a guy's heart :p). They're relationship is starting off so nicely...*sighs happily* Though, I can't help but wonder when things might start heating up. Especially with Amon wanting to take Michael to his own home. I mean...whoa, they could get into serious trouble. *shakes head* But I believe, or hope, everything will be all right in the end whatever they choose to do.

I'm still pretty mad about Zaizen and Touko -- what heartless people, but my curiosity is still brimming with wondering why exactly they are doing it -- just to torture Robin more, or is there more motive than that (perhaps something to do with Amon?).

I'm also happy that Amon is deciding to help. He can be like one of those background helpers that fixes stuff when they accidentally go wrong or get more undercover information that's more accessible. Heehee.

Wonderful chapter and I enjoyed reading it a lot, I can't wait for the next! Marvelous work.
person Chibi-chan
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such a sexy chapter, literally!

I\'m really curious as to what Zaizen and Touko are planning, they\'re so conniving and it\'s not fair to Robin to be betrayed by something like that. I\'m so happy to see Michael defend Amon when it came down to it, even thought he had a niggling bit of doubt bite at him because of the possibility.

I loved the lemon. The scenes between them were sweet and the way Amon wanted to make this special and memorable, it was just a really warm feeling that bloomed in me when I read. Normally sex is hot and over and done with like a snap of the fingers, but scenes like this, _sex_ like this turns out to be hot on an all new level and even more enjoyable, loving. I was grinning when I found out about the whole revenge on the parents and then sleeping in Zaizen\'s suite. *laughs* How fitting.

What an amazing chapter and I can\'t wait to see what\'s in store with the two of them. :)

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