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Yes, I can see why keeping his name would be distracting. XD Keep up the good work!

Oh, in that case, lol, I\sticstick with this one. :P But I\'m sure your non-yaoi fic will be just as good!

I\'m glad I got to read this, at first, I thought aff.net was going to have another break down and I\'d have to go through a withdrawl or something. But I\'m sliding off topic -- I would like to say that this fic is great. I love how you captured Michael and Amon\'s relationship and how they share this certain understanding with each other, the chemistry emitting from the writing is amazing.

My eyes teared up when I read Michael trying to explain his dream and how it involved Amon -- I\'m glad they\'re \"together\" now. I have to say I\'m greatly amused by Michael\'s gung-ho attitude about shacking it up (lol, sorry for the flat expression) -- it\'s just like a teenager to want to experiment and gain some know-how in this type of things. I\'m cheering for them both and I can\'t wait till that lemon stuff comes up. ;)

But now I\'m also interested in the whole Robin-Touko thing. Hm, somehow I kind of think it might involve Zaizen, but it\'s too early to say now. All I know is that she\'s being very shady!

Can\'t wait for more! This is going great.

*sniffles* Chapter five and six sealed the deal for me. The start and close to the end of six made me start to cry. I don\'t get how some parents (even if it was a dream) could be so damned mean to their child they consumated for god\'s sake (no pun ndednded) just because they prefer something \"from the norm.\" It\'s not right. I felt so bad for Michael in his dream(...?).

I\'m glad him and Amon finally had a talk, I especially like it how both of them connect so well and Michael is able to point out certain things Amon does, like about the cookies and such. It\'s really nice to have someone like that who can did deep within you and understand each other.

I wonder what\'s going to happen now though.

I read you branched off from the one on ff.net -- what changes specificallI maI may be interested in reading both, no matter how weird thaundsunds. :P

Sorry, no e-mail, live in a house that was wired in the dark ages. Good story so far, and who said you can\'t have at least two story lines running at the same time. The ones in my head sometimes run three or four. Keep up the good work!

*grins* Yeah, two plots makesrythrything a hell of a lot more interesting in terms of drama and all that cool shit that can happen. I can\'t wait to see what happens later on with Touko and how she copes, along with Robin, too. And Amon sure is just taking everything in and waiting for it reach a certain breaking point so he can raise a holy hell...while Michael sits and waits while Sakaki gets to listen in on everything. :p

I can\'t wait for more and what\'s going to happen. Everything is all up in the air and anything and everything is pretty possible. :) You\'re doing a wonderful job and I think have captured everyone of the characters perfectly.

it\'s a good story please continue it is alittle slow but all good stories take time keep writting -thankies

im really getting into this story please continue gosh toko is so bitchy i like the way you write the characters please continue -thanks

this story is great i like the different perspectives i also like how you wrote michale it\'s so well done ^_^

So far I like what I see. my only question is, whose the \"other\" person Amon into? curious indeed.
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Ah! I still love your Michael, he\'s done so well and so...Michael. Lol. I really love what you\'re doing and how you write, a lot. It\'s nice and fluid and the different perspectives are refreshing instead of reading the usual stale or limited narrator. I can\'t wait for you to write more and if my intuition is guiding me right...I know who Amon is attracted to -- well duh, any idiot could if they looked, but still. *feels proud* Heehee. Great job, keep writing. ;) I look forward to more.