rate_review Reviews

i love your story is it going to be continued or is this the end of it?

.....wow........*wipes away tear*.......that was really awesome..........sorry about such a short review, but i have to go to bed now........this one is definitly going into my favorites folder, and it would be great if you could write an epilogue to this story^^.........*hugs* love as thou wilt

I have to say, your summary doesn\'t do this story justice. I really, really enjoyed this story. Not just because of the pairing, but the word usage, the whole idea, the way you kept them so in character, it was just... Ah! so, so good it makes me want to cry. ;_; I wish I could write short blurbs like this. No time frame, no plot, no background, just the characters and a moment. A really well portrayed moment. Switching between each perspective was a great idea and seamlessly transitioned as well. Applause my fellow author. This was amazing. Just... change the summary? I honestly didn\'t read it for so long because of it. >.o Could just be me, though.

<3 <3 <3 Keep on writing.

- Kira

Oh, I absolutely loved this story. There were some grammatical mistakes, but I\'m sure that a proofread through it would get rid of those, no problem. But yeah... I loved this... you did such a good job of capturing their characters in such a way that made this story beautifully tragic... my heart just ached for the both of them by the end of the story... really, well done! I hope to read more of your works in the future. Keep up the good work!

This was so wonde... ...
Would it be possible to write a sequel to this beautiful story???