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OMG!!! You updated!! Thank you and this chapter was fantastic! So much emotion and the battles! Awesome!! Yay! I am glad it is back! Please update soon i cannot wait to read what will happen next!

My eye is twitching. This is so incrediably good. I really can't wait to read the next chapter, or I might go crazy.

Uhh... I know you don't want to portray Yuzuru as a bad character, but I still do't like him. *sigh*
Some things will never change ;-)
I was so pleasently surprised to see an update from you. Yay. Poor Naoe. He needs some smexing. Lol
I'm looking forward to the next update..

~KaraQ

Oh, this story is so good and I'm happy you got a chance for an update. Is's like a box of dinner mints one just isn't enough. Like I posted before thanks for the update and keep up the good work.

yeah, finaly a new chaper. This one is as great as the others. I wonder who Yuzuru realy is... update soon

It's so awesome that you've updated! I so stoked :) Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my god! I love this already! I started laughing when I realized how busted Takaya was ;and I just new Naoi was going to have a shit fit when he found out. Keep up the good work. Your writing is great!

i love the story and you did a good job on now i am wiat ing for more chapter ont the story and is if naz kill yurri and his lord found him.

are you going to continue the fic ?.....i'm always checking....if it's updated.......i really love the story....and i hope to raed more of it......soon......nina

Your story sucked. There wasn\'t anything in it that didn\'t suck. The characters were out of character, and the only people who could enjoy this story are loser schoolgirls who don\'t care about the actual plot of the story as much as they do the romance between two characters- oh and drama. Enough to drown in. Drama doesn\'t make a story good, and the only reason the angst in the actual Mirage of Blaze series worked was because it was well-balanced and interesting. I don\'t go for stories where the loser best friend makes out with the main character to make the main guy jealous. Talk about lame. To be fair, I only read the first two chapters, maybe it gets better after that, and I\'ll review if I decide to skip ahead and read into it later, and if it doesn\'t still suck, I\'ll appologize. The first two chapters weren\'t interesting though, sorry. Get some tallent.