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for Cruel Paradise

by twistedgirl

person Sakurablood
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!!!! I\'M BEGGING YOU ^_^ IT\'S SO HARD TO FIND MIRAGE FANFICS
person Tamura
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hidoi! that\'s a horrible cliffhanger. naoe can\'t be hurt, or at least not badly- Takaya needs him too much. wahhh! *bawls* i\'m glad you updated though, even if it was over a month ago. *glares* write more!
person Tamura
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drawn out sigh* you did not just leave it there. not after i\'ve waited this long to read the newest chapter. i wanna know what happens! i want Takaya to get there in time to stop Naoe and tell him that he forgives him and loves him. god damn it, why are they both so thick-skulled?!
person Stefanie
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CP gets better and better everytime I read it. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next, so please update soon! ^_^
person Akira_Nyaag
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another splendid chapter- it was worth the wait. Your characterization of Naoe is spot on, with his four hundred years of suffering and all. It\'s been some time now since I\'ve seen the series in its entirity but I think I\'ve been inspired to rewatch it again (can\'t believe I\'ve forgotton who some of the people are). Anyway, I\'ll be awaiting your next update, keep up the good work!
[And let\'s all hope someone (as in Media Blasters) licenses the OVA soon] ^_^
person KD
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I promised I would review, and here am I! Exciting chapter, as always. I can\'t wait to see the fight actually. God, sometimes, I\'m so bloddy angry with Takaya. He\'s in love with Naoe and yet he wants to fight him! I just don\'t understand that man. Just shower Naoe with some love and he\'ll he all right! And Yuzuru, gosh! He\'s another total idiot. He shoud have realised that leaving Takaya alone would be the best solution. Fighting Naoe isn\'t a good idea... Well, a bad one. God, I ca\'t wait for the next... don\'t torture me anymore! I need to read the rest! Please,... just make yuzuru stay away from takaya for good. I hated him, after reading your fic.
person KD
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I got to tell you this.. Please excuse the typos... I typed it in one shot and didn\'t bother to check them! Sorry about that!

Kadzuki
person aurora
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh....cliffhanger!!!! noooo.......... ;P

thank you thank you THANK YOU for continuing this story!! there\'s so little MoB fic out there that when i stumble over such marvelous writing like this, it feels like an extra-special present! keep up the good work!
person Floretta
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good to know that Naoe only suffered a bit of humiliation. Damn, *sighs*. What could be worse at the hands of Kousaka? Anyway I liked this chapter because you have picked up the action it was intense. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I\'m bitting my nails in anticipation. Will Yuzura break his promise and fight with Naoe? But I did like Naoe\'s question to Y. Because who really knew Kagetora? Keep up the good work. I recommend this fic to everyone. Until the next chapter. Great Work!!!
person Sephykoi
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods, that was great. I apologize for taking so freakin\' long to read the next chapter ^^; *kicks school* :D I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story; keep it up man :DD!

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