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for Cruel Paradise

by twistedgirl

person Stefanie
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you characterize Naoe & Takaya in your fic. Although I could do without the cliff hanger in the last chapter, how mean of you to leave it there. -_- Please continue!
person Tamura
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hidoi-na! how could you leave it there?! after Takaya was coming to help Naoe, and instead finds him on the ground. *mutters under breath* stupid Kosaka. hurting naoe like that... for shame. anyways, right more ASAP so i can find out what happens next!
person Shirubaa Kitsune
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really really really really really *breathes in deep* really really really.....
Well you get the picture...-_-;
please update soon, and if it\'s not to much trouble, let me know when you do. PPPPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAASSSEEEEE don\'t make me wait for to long.

Shirubaa Kitsune
person Stefanie
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re so mean to leave it there! I must know what happens to Naoe, so you must update soon! ^_^
person Jenniyah
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, everyone's soo emotional in this one hehehehe
ah, so rare to find a long lengthed mirage of blaze fanfic... keep up the good work... a interesting read :)
person wilyfox34
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter. Was glad for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to find out what that snake Kousaka is up to. Finally you even injected this chapter with a little humor. Priceless I can kicksakasaka's ass lol. Keep up the good work. Don't doubt that this is the best MoB fic around. I also reviewed at mediaminer. This fic has been great to have considering how little in English there is of Mirage. Thanks.
person KD (kadzuki)
schedule October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember which name I used to review you, but I'd like to say this again.. this is awesome! I've been checking for your updates constantly I'm I'm seriously glad when I saw you updated! Congratulations! You made me hated yuzuru more than anything else. Gosh... What the hell is wrong with that guy? He claimed that he's not in love with Takaya, but they way he behaves is sooooo.. Urg!! I don't know. I pity Naoe. He's hopelessly in love with his master .... and he got to put up with Takaya's unreasonable demands. But hey... This is why your fic is so damn interesting that I can't sit still when I was reading your fic! Hope you're uploading your next chapter soon! This is thebest mirage of blaze fic I've ever read! Get the next chapter done, will you? Onegai!!!! I have this unreasonable request.. If it's not much of a hassle, can you please e mail me when you're posting your next chapter? I would love to be updated! Thank you!!!! I think you deserve a chocolate cookie for writing this!
person wilyfox34
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have tried to review this fic on every site that I have visited. It is so great. It's been some time since the last update. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Akira_Nyaag
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written and well done. I love this fic! You did a great job of making the characters true to themselves. Please update soon.
person KD
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can you believe that I actually read all 7 chapters in one sitting? It was so intense and i felt like screaming when it ended.. Update soon!

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