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for Checkmate: Royal Aquisition

by Kyattochan

person Puppybaddog
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I need to tell you to hurry up and update I\'m sure you\'ve read a lot of those, you should go at your own pace and the excitement of waiting to read the next chapter is always there...anyways I just figured since it\'s been months since you updated just wanted to tell you that I and many others LOVE this story, and we hope you can update soon before we forget our place in the story...wonderful work keep it up...:)
person Firiel11
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted you to know that I have thoroughly enjoyed your story, from beginning to end. I especially liked the way you characterized Saitoh, and as a History major, the royalty tidbits you added at the end of each chapter. Since I am a newbie at AFF.net, I would very much appreciate it if you would email me the next time you update, and let me know if there\'s a list to join or something. Thanx!

Once again, great story--keep it up!

~Firiel11
elfsage@hotmail.com
person Kallipygia
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Fireminx! As always, I enjoyed reading the newest chapter of this fic. Poor Tokio, having to suffer through this! I thought Megumi\'s reaction to the whole affair was very well done, and Saitou\'s increasing compassion for Tokio, expressed in the only ways he can allow himself, are very touching. Keep up the good work! :)
person Lyss
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Having no constructive comments to offer--only boundless praise--I\'ve never written a review before. But when chapter 16 nearly made me cry, I knew I needed to at least say something. Thank you for this intelligent, well written story that I believe stays very faithful to one of my all time favorite characters. Keep up the amazing work. Thank you again.
person Zerianyu
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Loud squeal of excitment) You updated hurahh hurahh. I love this fic I do hope you post soon, but whneever life gives yo ua chance ughhhhhhhhhh I hate sour milk products...............umm asnyway sorry. I am still thorally confused and can\'t not wait until you updated. I need to updated fics...........hmmmmmm m ybrain dosn\'t ahev any ideas though ughhhh I need to go lie down wahhhhh sister for taking her laptop lol. I hope all gets better for you. Love it eeeeeeee you updated hurah.
person Kallipygia
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Fireminx! Just wanted to say I\'m still enjoying this story tons; thanks for updating! *does happy dance* I\'ve love the turn you\'ve taken with Tokio\'s power (i.e. her being a channel), and the developing relationship between Tokio and Saitou. I also appreciate the little relevant historical notes at the end of each chapter; please keep doing that!

You do a great job of keeping the romantic/erotic tension going, and I love your lemons. I don\'t know how tightly plotted this story is or if you\'ve got any room to take suggestions, but I\'d love to see a lemon between Tokio and Saitou with a willing Tokio who\'s had the \"birds-and-bees\" talk that was missing from her previous education. :)
person steelphoenix
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I can\'t wait for you to end the cliffhanger! What is a channel? What is Tokio\'s power? What will Saitou do about it? I\'m on edge here! PLEASE UPDATE!
This story is really well-written! It just drew me in, and I couldn\'t stop reading... I just had to see what happened next. You\'ve got the characters of Saitou and Tokio really well, and made them really interesting - giving them real \'character\'! I love it... and I love them. Please keep writing, this is great... except for the cliffhangers!
person mel
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! it was getting soooo good! keep going, it\'s an order!
person Senaca
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was some very well written and interesting chapters. Also, the facts at the bottom of each chapter provides a different point of view on some of history\'s figures. I like it. Please update soon.
person Ellie
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story...i kinda find it gross that saito is like 30 something years old, but its all good. great job...write more

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